~And Then There Were Seven~

Jackson- I walked over to the plane, and stepped inside, starting to get stuff together. I didn't really talk. I just grabbed things, and took them out, to where the shelter would be.


Daley- I soon found some fruit. "Wow..." I said, as I looked.

{{BTW, you need rules on the front page.}}

Melissa-

As soon as I started this, I wished I hadn't. I'm not exactly fit, and it was difficult for me to carry what we needed for the shelter. "Where should I put this?" I squeaked, my arms shaking under the weight.

(What's I do wrong?
Besides not post rules............)

(That's it. Just, on the front page, you need a list of rules.)

Jackson- I came over, and helped Melissa. "Here, I'll help. Just follow me..." I said, taking steps back, toward where it should go.

Melissa-
"Uh, thanks," I said, feeling kind of useless. I hung my head and followed behind the rest of them.

Jackson- "Trust me, it's fine. You're one of the better one's here." I said, making sure nobody else heard, and I said it quietly, so nobody did.



Daley- I kept walking, and soon found more fruits. I ran back to the group. "Guys, I found fruit.! We have food." I was excited.

(Ok, I added rules. I figured I was missing something... Just didn't remember what.)

Melissa-
"Oh, thanks," I said, taken aback by the comment.

Taylor-

"Wow, cool!" I said sarcastically. "You're like Jane now!"

Jackson- I turned around, and looked at Daley. "Great. Now we have to get it back here."


Daley- I gave a scowl toward Taylor. Then I nodded at what Jackson said.