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Post by Katiegirl97 6/1/2010, 6:41 pm

Maturity: Medium/High everything except Pregnancies and Marriage
Fantasy: High


§Wind Whispers High School§

Home of the Jaguars



Your walking down the street from school, its been the worst day ever.
Lightning sparks through the sky, and thunder rummbles across the sky, then it starts
to rain, he growl under your breath thinking this day couldn't get any worst. Well think again, as you walk down the street a guy comes running and grabs your backpack filled with all
your stuff, and you get mad and then the man starts to float into the sky. Your amazed not knowing how or why the man was flying, so you let go of concentration and the man falls to the ground and drops your bag, then runs off. You smiled relizing you did that, you walk over and get your backpack and run home to tell your mom and dad. Then your mom and dad tell you the truth, your so excited, and can't wait to tell your friends and in a blink of a eye your being
sent to a school called Wind Whispers High School. You then see the huge school and start your new life in the most dangerous place in the world "Wind Whispers", which is full of Vampires, werewolves, witchs, time travlers, and many other things that you dont know about yet.
Well good luck your going to need it.





Rules
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* No Powerplaying or Godmodling
* If your going to cuss type *He/She cussed* or *Beep*
* Be nice to your partner
* Have Fun





*Form*

Name:
Gender:
Grade:
Age:
Description(Pictures are good):
Personality:
Likes/Hobbies:
Dislikes/fears:
History:
Secret:
Other:





*Characters*



MuffMuff's Characters:

Comet Chaos Pandemonium~11th grade/Junior~ 17


Katie's Charcaters:

Ian Rayha~11th grade/Junior~ 17


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Name: Ian Rayha
Gender: Male
Grade: 11th
Age: 17 (124 in vampire years)
Description(Pictures are good): § |Wind Whispers| § Drewroy_1242084873
Personality: TBPO
Likes/Hobbies: Like the Dark, wolves, lightning, when it stroms, being alone come times, hanging out with friends, drivigng his Motorcycle and his Black Corvet.
Dislikes/fears: Annoying people, stalkers, girls who take it too fast, and doesn't like the light.

History:
Secret: Vampire, and has too vampire powers, he can do stuff with his mind, and can turn invisable.
Other: Noppers
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Post by {Neon Muffins} 6/1/2010, 7:02 pm

Name: Comet Chaos Pandemonium
Gender: Female.
Grade:Eleventh
Age:17. Actually about 115,but Comet Children's appearances freeze at 17.
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Personality:Comet is quiet and shy when you first get to meet her, but after you get to know her, she's pretty outgoing and fun. Not ver talkative though,unless you're her best friend.
Likes/Hobbies: Comet likes
-Sitting outside; just enjoying life
-Hanging out with her friends
-The rain,and dancing in the rain
-Meteor Showers
Dislikes/fears: Comet dislikes
-Rude people
-Talkative people
-Cupcakes,and any type of sweet except icing-less cake and muffins.
Comet fears
-Tornados
-Being taken back to her home comet
-Her evil sister,Mallorie.
-Loosing the necklace that allows her to stay on Earth.
History: Comet was born seventeen years ago on July 30th. She had been destined her whole life to grow up to marry the comet king and become comet queen,but she did'nt want that.So,she stole a magical piece of meteorite,and stuck it in a little bag. She then escaped to Earth.
Secret:A comet child.She can predict when natural disasters happen.
Other:
Alrighty,Katarang.Who starts?
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[Can you start and awesome Wink. ]
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Post by {Neon Muffins} 6/1/2010, 7:27 pm

Comet Chaos Pandemonium
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Please don't cry one tear for me,I'm not afraid of
what I have to say
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Comet glanced around her surroundings,biting her lip.These surroundings weren't new to her,not at all.Ever since Comet came here,to Earth,-which was when she had the appearance of a human fourteen year old-, she had been going to Wind Whispers. Oddly,over her years at Wind Whispers, she only had met one real friend--Ian. Despite the fact they had so little in common,they had just come to be friends so easily.

Comet sat on the ground. As she sat on the ground,she noted a few things about the grass,due to boredom. She had noted that the grass was an emerald green, and that it was moistened with dew from over night. After noting these things and comfortably seating herself on the grass, she glanced around.

It was a nice day in the small town she lived in.Nice and cool,with the possiblity of rain,too. Comet grinned at the thought of rain.She liked rain-she always had liked it. It didn't rain on comets-another great thing about Earth. Sighing happily,Comet lay her backpack on the ground,and set her head of bright pink hair on it,using the backpack as a pillow.She then glanced up at the sky,partially daydreaming and partially cloud gazing, making shapes out of the mysterious puffy,white cotton ball like things that never failed to amaze her.

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This is my one and only voice,So listen close, it's only for today
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OOC:Here you go,Katarang.
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Post by Katiegirl97 6/1/2010, 7:55 pm

[ I dont have a template Razz. I dont know how to make them.]


Ian walked out of the school smiled as he looked at the sky to see the sun was out, but just covered by the Dark Grey clouds, covering the beautiful baby blue sky. He stepped down the steps looking for something to do.

Ian had been going to Wind Whispers for a few years now, he was use the his surroundings now and was happy he had made some friends.
Ian would at mit he had a crush on someone, and that some one was a beautiful girl named Comet. She was one of Ian's true friends, cause she understood him unlike others who thought he was strange.

He soon saw his friend sitting on the grass, he smiled and walked over slowly not wanting to startle her or anything. He walked over and smiled lightly " Hey Comet " he said looking at her with a small faint grin.
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Post by {Neon Muffins} 6/2/2010, 7:54 pm

[My template isn't working,Katarang.D:]

Comet lifted up her head,and turned it,hearing a voice. She saw it was Ian,and grinned.She then sat up,tucking her legs to the side of her,and brushing off the few blades of grass that stuck to her white jeans. She then said "Oh,Hey,Ian.How've you been?"

She then pointed casually up to the sky with her thumb,and said "It's probably gonna rain soon."After she said this,a clap of thunder burst from the sky,and lightning flashed.The sky turned a dark grey,practically black. Rain started drizzling down,turning the dirt to mud and leaving crystalline drops on all the vivid green grass. She grinned "Some kids must've sped up the rain."

SHe then looked at her jeans,and groaned."Hey,Ian,I really like the rain,but the mud is turning my jeans from white to brown.Could we at least get somewhere less muddy?" She giggled a bit,for no reason,and stood up,swinging her backpack over her shoulder as she stood.

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Ian smiled at Comet and shrugged lightly " I've been good, just hanging around mostly. It's been quiet lately" he said with a small grin.
Ian looked up at the grey storm clouds in the sky and nodded " Yah, I thought the same, but I can actually come outside, " he said with a small smile. When ever it was sunny out if Ian wanted to come olutside he had to were a Hoodie and wear the hood, over his head.
He smiled and nodded " Probably, some people do that. I wish I could do that, " he said with a smile. He smiled lightly as some electric blue lighting bolts struck the ground a few miles away from the school, he grin he always liked lightning. Then some Thunder rummbled across the sky, and he looked back at Comet and nodded " Sure, Know where can we go that it'snt as muddy?" he thought out loud like most of the time.
Ian Stuck a hand out, offering to help her up, he smiled lightly at her.
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Post by {Neon Muffins} 6/3/2010, 8:00 pm

Comet gladly took his hand to get up,and as soon as she was up,let go. She bit her lip,thinking about where wouldn't be muddy,but was still outside. "Yeah...go to the benches under the little roof type thingy over there." She gestured to her right,about 10 feet away. As soon as she said this,she ran for the pavilion,I believe it's called.She didn't think to waiit for Ian.

As soon as Comet got to the pavilion thingamabobber, she stopped,dead in her tracks. A ringing noise,low and long,sounded in her ears. She froze,horrified. This sense told her that a tornado was coming,and due to the low part of the ring, she could tell it was about 1 mile-possibly less- away.After quickly and panickedly analyzing this ring...

She screamed,a scream to alert a person. It was high and hearable over the thunder,a scream she could only produce during a natural disaster.She then yelled as loud as she could "Ian... tornado! About a mile away..runrunrun as fastasyoucan!!"as she began to panic more,her words became jumbled and confusing.

Right after she screamed this,the tell-tale siren that sounded out of Wind Whisper High whenever a natural disaster was happening rang. Shortly after this, the principal practically yelled into the microphone "Tornado,about a little less than a mile away! Run to the nearest shelter you can find. If you are outdoors, try and find a pavilion to get under!"
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Post by Katiegirl97 6/3/2010, 8:12 pm

Ian watched her point to the Benches, he watched her run over there he shook his head with a smile, he followed her. But he walked over there slowly he injoyed the rain, but it started to come down a little harder, he walked over and sat on one of the benches. He was happy to find out that the bench was dry because he would of stayed standing up if it would of been wet.

Ian looked up at her, then he started to here the nosie, but to him it sounded like a Lawn mower next to his ears, he nodded and jumpped up off the benched and jumpped behind the bench and got under a table which was the best thing to do.

Then he heard the speaker phone about the tornado, he looked up at the speaker right above them, he looked at Comet " Come on you need to get under here, " he said his eyes were dark, he was in his protective stage which explanned his eyes color.

He covered his ears as the sound got louder and longer, to him it felt like knives and styrafoam craping aganist a chalk board. He grinned his teeth at the sound.
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Post by {Neon Muffins} 6/4/2010, 7:15 pm

Comet ran for it,making it to the table and quickly ducking under it,her hands protectively placed over her heads. It reminded her of all the years in school,where they'd make you squeeze under your desk,in the same position.Except,instead of girls giggling and conversing quietly while others moaned grumpily about how uncomfortable they were,this was real...The real thing..a real,live tornado. Comet was horrified...she wanted to just run away from it all,to flee and never come back.

A few seconds later, the tell tale bellow that resembled a freight train rang out, telling the members of the school that the tornado was here, a destructive whirlwind had touched land and was now out to destroy us all. Comet let herself find a piece of peace and harmony insde her. She let herself grasp onto that little piece of peace,and let herslef relax. If she was going to die,she figured she might as well die peacefully. For a currently pesstimistic acting person,she was extremely peaceful at the moment.

About seven seconds later,it was all over. At about the three second mark, a piece of glass that had probably came out of one of the school's window had deeply cut her arm,so for the past five seconds blood had been dripping all down her, soaking her skin a deep red. As soon as the tornado was over, her mind told her two things- stop the bleeding from her arm,and find Ian. First off, to stop the bleeding. Luckily,she had a jacket wrapped around her waist that had stayed on during the tornado. She quickly pulled it off,and grabbed a sharp piece of glass nearby.She quickly sawed off the zipper part of the jacket,so she wouldn't hurt herself.

By the time she was done sawing off the zipper-which wasn't very long-she already was beginning to feel as if she was loosing use of the cut arm.With a bit of difficulty,she was able to securely tie the jacket around her arm,hoping it would at least lessen the blood flow. She then noticed there was a puddle of blood beside her right leg,and her white jeans were a deep red.But she wasn't concerned about that right now..she was concerned about finding Ian,and getting very panicked. "Ian!"she screamed. This was the only thing she could say, before her breathing became a bit shallow,and she felt dizzy.Comet was having a panic attack.

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Post by Katiegirl97 6/4/2010, 7:57 pm

After the over head gave the sign that the tornado was here he wenmt under a table but didn't have enough time, the lawn mower noise rang in his ears that mad him want to knock a tree down if he had time too.

He couldn't find Comet so he started to run around the area looking for her, the winds picked up and he ran torwards the tables hoping to find her when a medal chair came flying through the air and went straight at him he went to cover his head but the edge of the chair hit him straight in the head. It left a echo in the air, but it wasn't able to be heard over the Tornado. The chair forced him against the wall and he slid under the table.

Ian blacked out after being hit in the head by the edge of the chair and from being banged in the head and back by the wall. Blood trickled down slowly down where the edge of the chair had hit him, he could still hear the twisters ruthless sound. He wanted to wake up so he could find Comet but he couldn't.
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Post by {Neon Muffins} 6/4/2010, 8:28 pm

After her panic attack stopped,and Comet returned to common sense,she almost instantly spotted Ian,limp and seemingly lifeless, under a nearby table. Comet screamed,and leapt to her feet as quickly as she could. She carefully slid him out from under the table,shoving the metal chair out of the way before she pulled him all the way out.

The first thing Comet noticed was the trickling stream of blood that flowed from this forehead. She knew if this stream of blood flowed much longer, Ian could possibly... -the word she hated-... die. She quickly looked around,trying to find something to bandage his head with.She spotted some gauze that probably flew out of the nurse's office about 10 feet away.


"I'll be right back." Comet whispered,as if Ian was awake,and could actually hear her. She sprinted over to get the gauze,picked it up,and ran back,tightly grasping the gauze.As soon as she got back to Ian,she sat by him and lifted his head,beginning to wrap around the gauze. When she was done wrapping the gauze around his head,she secured it tightly with the clip that came with the gauze,and lightly kissed his forehead, hoping her forehead kiss would have magical healing powers or something. She then tucked her legs to one side of her,and sat by Ian,hoping he'd wake up soon.

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Post by Katiegirl97 6/4/2010, 8:50 pm

Ian layed there out cold, he felt himself moving, and he thought for sure he was being dragged for the tornado. But then he heard Comet's voice and knew that he was safe. He wanted to opened his eyes but couldn't.

Ian waited for her to come back, he didn't know about his head bleeding because of the chair, until she started wrapping something around his head. He kept trying to wake himself up but couldn't. He was still breathing luckly though,
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Post by {Neon Muffins} 6/4/2010, 9:06 pm

Comet thought she heard him breathing,but just to be sure,she placed two figers on his wrist. He has a pulse!she thought.Her spirts lifted,and she lightly shook Ian's shoulders. "Ian..c'mon...wake up...please?"She looked at him, hopefully.

After looking at him for a few seconds,she propped up his head with a nearby piece of soft cloth,that kind of resembled a blanket. She wasn't sure what it was,but oh well. She then sat there,knowing there was nothing else she could do.

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Post by Katiegirl97 6/4/2010, 9:59 pm

Ian finally came to his sences and opened his dark blue beautiful Ocean blue eyes. He sat up and made a painful nosie as he touched his head by accident.

He looked up at Comet and smiled lightly, he looked at her jeans " What happend? " he asked her noticing the redness.

OOC: Nope I wouldn't say that was powerplaying Wink
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Post by {Neon Muffins} 6/5/2010, 6:16 pm

Comet smiled lightly "Oh,well are you looking for the obvious,or not? Without waiting for an answer, she said "Well, the obvious is that a big,scary tornado just ripped through here,leaving a boo-boo on your head and on my arm." She then tilted her head,and smiled.After a second or two,she inhaled deeply,and said "You probably don't want the obvious..."

So,she said "What seriously happened is that a piece of glass cut my arm. I used my jacket as a make shift bandage.I then found you unconcious under this bench,and wrapped gauze around your head.The red on my pants is dried blood,partially yours but mainly mine."She then straightened her head,and took off the jacket she had tied around her arm. She revealed a deep cut,but it wasn't bleeding anymore,luckily. "This... is the cut I was talking about."
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Ian listened to her, " It doesn't matter which you tell me I just want to know what happened to us, " he said to her. He listened to every word that Comet said.

Ian sighed " Im sorry that you got hurt " he said when Comet revealed the cut on Comet's arm.
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Post by {Neon Muffins} 6/5/2010, 6:39 pm

Comet said "Don't apologize. You didn't do anything to cause this tornado...I have my suspicions to who did,actually." He voice trailed off,and she looked down,bringing her attention to her arm so she didn't have nothing to do.She then re-tied the jacket to her arm,slowly and methodically wrapping the pale blue fabric securely on. After this,Comet began to thoughtfully run her fingers throught her magentaish pink hair.

About a minute later,Comet said randomly "We had better get you to the school nurse's office...or what ever's left of it." she paused for a second,and made the swallowing gulpish noise. "I wanna make sure that the metal that your blood came in contact with wasn't dirty,to prevent blood poisioning. Plus,the fact I seriously need to get some antibiotics on this cut so I don't get infected,too." SHe started to get up,when suddenly a cold gust of wind blew by her. She shivered a bit,and then stood all the way up.Hmm.. that was weird."she said,mainly to herself. She then held out her hand,to help Ian up.
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Post by Katiegirl97 6/5/2010, 7:19 pm

Ian looked at her and held his head it really hurt " Yah, I know but, I feel like it's my fault that you got hurt, " he said to her. His eyes were a dark emerald Green. He lifted a eyebrow " Who do you did this? " he asked her curiously.

Ian looked at her and shook his head " Im fine, I dont need th-the nurse " he said studdering his words a tad. He felt faintish, but he hid his dizzyness. He looked at Comet " Come on, I want to make sure your ok " he said taking her hand lightly.
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Post by {Neon Muffins} 6/5/2010, 7:45 pm

Comet said stubbornly,"It is not your fault I got hurt, Ian.Get that thought out of your head,immediately"She then paused,and took in a deep breath of air. "Remember when I told you about my evil-ish sister,Mallorie? I fear... she might be on Earth."She shuddered,and said "Ian,my sister is a star child, and well... she can create natural disasters. Me and Mallorie?We're like oil and water. We don't mix."

Comet took a long pause,and said "Yes,you do need the nurse.You're stuttering,and you look like you're about to completely fall over." She then helped him up,and said "Walk slowly...I don't want you to fall over."She began to guide him towards the school, heading in the direction of the nurse's office. She took short,careful steps.
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Ian looked at her when she had said that and he listened to her, he let the thought out of his head. He looked at her and tried to remember " Mallorie, I-I remember you saying something about her " he said to her, he started to see double. He shook his head trying to see correctly.


Ian didn't think he need the nurse and thought he would just be fine. He stood up with the
help of Comet, and looked around brefly, and wanted to just collapse onto the ground but stayed up. His face was getting paler he walked to the nurse with the help of Comet of course.
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Post by {Neon Muffins} 6/6/2010, 2:56 pm

The nurse was gone when they got there,but a surprisingly intact book on how to identify illnesses lay on the floor. Comet said "Sit somewhere,Ian." She then ran over and picked up the book,and flipped to 'B',for blood poisoning. The first two paragraphs were all about the technical name for blood poisoning, so she skipped them.It then said 'HOW TO DIAGNOSE' in large,bold letters. It said:Take the patient's fever. Comet sighed,there were no thermometers around. She scanned her eyes down the page,and it said 'See if the patient has a red line near the cut. ' She took off the jacket on her arm,and there was thankfully no red line.She then ran over to Ian.
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Post by Katiegirl97 6/6/2010, 4:47 pm

Ian sat down, he was kinda forced because he could bairly stand. He held his head which hurt badly, he growled lightly. He grinned his teeth and his fangs were out all the way which meant he was mad.
He looked at her as she read the book, he took the bandage off because it started to get annoying.
He watched her check her arm, then as she walked over to him.
His cut had a tad bit of red around it.
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Post by {Neon Muffins} 6/6/2010, 5:42 pm

Comet bit her lip "Well,I'm not sure if you have blood poisoning,actually.But to be safe,we should get you to a doctor." She grabbed the bandage,and re-wrapped his cut. Then,she held out her hand "I'll help you to my car,so we can get to the doctor's. Grab my hand."
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