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Post by Katiegirl97 6/6/2010, 6:06 pm

Ian looked at her his face was paler then before, he took her hand slowly, and stood up. He hated the doctors but he didn't want to have blood poisoning.
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Post by {Neon Muffins} 6/7/2010, 8:06 pm

She slowly walked all the way to her car,leading Ian there slowly.It was a simple,silver car. Nothing fancy about it.She bit her lip,clearly embarrassed. She lead him to her car,and opened the passenger's seat. "Here,get in the car."she said quietly.
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Post by Katiegirl97 6/7/2010, 9:22 pm

Ian followed her to her car, he was quiet the whole way to the car, which meant something had to be wrong with him.
He got in and layed his head back on the head rest.
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Post by {Neon Muffins} 6/8/2010, 8:56 pm

Comet kept constantly looking over at Ian as she drove,clearly worried about him.It was hard to drive without your eyes on the road though.About halfway through, she began to fully pay attention to the road. Eventually,there were there. "I'll help you out of the car."she said softly.
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Post by Katiegirl97 6/8/2010, 10:33 pm

Ian breathed lightly, he held his head and growled under his breath, Ian had anger issues ever since he had ran away from home when he was little.
He looked over at her and nodded weakly.
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Post by {Neon Muffins} 6/9/2010, 5:44 pm

Comet smiled,and got out of my side of the car, carefully shutting the silver painted door,so no scratches would appear.She ran over to the other side of the car,and opened the door. Then,she held out her hand, and said"C'mon,out of the car,and into the hospital."
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Post by Katiegirl97 6/9/2010, 5:48 pm

Ian, stepped out of the car, and his leggs got wobbly but he stayed onto his feet. He shut the door behind him and took Comet's hand so he wouldn't fall again, well at least come close to it.
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Post by {Neon Muffins} 6/9/2010, 7:56 pm

Comet glanced at him nervously,and said "Okay,take slow,steady steps."She began to help him towards the hospital,slowly edging him towards the large grey doors.
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Post by Katiegirl97 6/9/2010, 7:58 pm

Ian stood up straight, he walked by her side, and kept himself from falling over. He looked around as they aproach the Hospital, he frowned lightly he hated the Hospital.
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Post by {Neon Muffins} 6/9/2010, 8:10 pm

She lead him into the hospital,and walked up to the hospital attendant,who simply said before Comet could open her mouth "Tornado patients to the room to your right."Comet nodded her head,and sai"Alright,Ian...time to walk again."
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Post by Katiegirl97 6/9/2010, 8:28 pm

Ian, stopped when she talked to the person. He sighed lightly and nodded " Alright, " he said walking in the correct direction.
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Post by {Neon Muffins} 6/10/2010, 8:54 pm

Comet followed behind,and sat down in a chair once they got in. A sign on the wall said 'A DOCTOR WILL BE WITH YOU ASAP' in all capital letters.
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Post by Katiegirl97 6/10/2010, 8:58 pm

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Ian sat down, and read the sign, he sighd lightly.
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