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Post by Dark Fairytales 6/2/2010, 12:41 am

I REMEMBER THOSE TIMES
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this won't be too good, considering it won't rhyme much and i didn't put much thought into it


I remember those times,
When we would laugh,
And we would cry
But it always turned out the same.
The fact that we always loved each other,
Was never a game.

Until you played me,
And everything went wrong.
I saw the texts,
I saw the pics.
But most of all,
I saw you with her,
When it should have been you with me,
And I understood

That the whole time,
You turned it into a game.
Our love,
Our kisses,
Our hugs,
and our laughs.
Nothing but a game to you.

It hurt me so bad,
My heart broke into millions of pieces,
But while I cried,
You laughed,
and said,
"It was all just a game"

Then I reminded you,
Of those times,
When we would laugh with each other,
Scream at each other,
Cry with each other.

Of all those good times,
Of all those bad times.
But most of all,
What we have been through.
Together we made a perfect couple.

And then you wanted me back,
But instead,
You got a fist in your face.
And this time,
I laughed
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Post by shadowsowner888 6/2/2010, 10:37 pm

Aw, good job! :/ It may not rhyme, but dude, it's still a good poem. ^^ It just works, and it feels real.
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Post by Dark Fairytales 6/2/2010, 11:48 pm

Really ? thanks =] i think im getting better !!
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Post by <3--[Emily]--<< 6/4/2010, 8:25 am

Yes I love the last part! Wooo! xD
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Post by Dark Fairytales 6/4/2010, 5:42 pm

Thank you =]
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