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Post by pirox_2012 7/13/2010, 10:39 am

((M&F: kissing))

This is basically the true story of my life. I've changed the names a bit though.



Two years ago:
Dear Diary:
Today was very special,
I met a boy today,
His eyes sparkle like the stars,
I hear his name is Drake.

Next day:
Dear Diary:
Today was extraordinary,
Drake talked to me today,
His voice is like the angels,
I loved what he had to say.

One year ago:
Dear Diary:
Today was very sad,
Drake kissed a girl today,
I hear her name is Cara,
They are in love, to my dismay.

A few weeks ago:
Dear Diary:
Today my heart was broken,
Drake's dreams were too today,
Cara tore his world apart,
And left him here that way.

Today:
Dear Diary:
Today I died a little more,
Like I do each day,
'Cause Drake will never love me,
I think I'll die this way.


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Post by Puckspaw 7/13/2010, 2:26 pm

Aww, great job, Tay! It's sad, but really good. nod
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Post by Adrigirl19 7/13/2010, 4:21 pm

Aww, this is great. I love it, even though I don't usually like sad.
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Post by Novastare 7/13/2010, 8:55 pm

Awww, awesome poem, though so sad. It's sweet, yet sad because you don't believe he'll love you. He will!!! And even if he doesn't, you'll learn so much from this. Though I'm quite sure you'll be in love with somebody and they'll love you back very soon. I'm not sure if it will be T or J, but I know it will be somebody.
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Post by pirox_2012 7/15/2010, 12:10 am

Thanks Nova, I'm trying not to give up hope.
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