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Post by shadowsowner888 8/10/2009, 6:31 pm

. . . um, something. xD It might sound a little weird for me, considering I'm more of a dragon/shapeshifter person, but I'm writing a documentary about mermaids. If you read my blog on Friday or the post with the spoiler on the boy club, you'll know why.

So I need help with figuring out what sorts of things to put in there. I can come up with the specifics, I just need to know in general. xD Like, for example, you could tell me to put something about their fighting techniques in. But if you have some sort of specific idea, like how exactly they should fight, I wouldn't mind you suggesting it. x3

I already have some things in the documentary. rolleyes I just need more, lol, to make it complete. And I wanna make sure I have everything I need. So what should I put in there? Here's what I've already got.

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Post by PugsRock 8/10/2009, 6:33 pm

Since I don't want to suggest what you already have, what have you come up with already?
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Post by shadowsowner888 8/10/2009, 6:41 pm

Well, I don't really know how to summarize it without going on and on, so I'll just post what I have. xD Brb.
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Post by DreamCatcher81 8/11/2009, 3:56 pm

I've researched mermaids quite a lot for BTW and I think you've got a lot of the basic details.

You might want to put in that they are often confused with sirens.
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Post by shadowsowner888 8/12/2009, 9:10 am

Oh, really?! xD Cus seriously, I was making half of this stuff up. (Lol, I'm like trying to say, "HAHA, YOU WERE WRONG!") That's a good idea, though. Sirens. nod

*goes to figure out what sirens are*

Bird-women? xD Wow. I don't get how people can confuse them with fish-people.
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Post by iGrievous 8/12/2009, 1:16 pm

Excuse me, Dream, but anyone can make up anything about a mermaid, therefore, there is no right answer, of course.

NObody argue, got it? I'm not in the mood. (Never, really.)

Um. . . otherwise I got nothing. How about, um. . . what they look for in a 'mate'? I dunno.
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Post by shadowsowner888 8/12/2009, 1:18 pm

Well, Gri, she's just saying it based on common beliefs. There's nothing wrong with that. Smile

xD That could be interesting! I'll consider that, if I can figure out a good way to include it.
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Post by Jinx 8/12/2009, 5:41 pm

How about how they see underwater?Oh,and Marriage ceremonys.That would be interesting.
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Post by shadowsowner888 8/13/2009, 9:18 am

Oooh, good ideas! Very Happy

I'm gonna write these down for later. nod

Marraige - What they look for; ceremonies.
Seeing underwater

((Yes, I did actually write it down. xD I'm just telling you what I wrote.
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Post by Jinx 8/13/2009, 9:19 am

Kewl!
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Post by DreamCatcher81 8/13/2009, 1:10 pm

Well a lot of the description is similar to what I've learned about them.

I know no one knows exactly what they are like, but I've done a lot of research on what people think they are like Gri. Maybe, they are not true, but they are what the people who actually believe in them and make documenteries on them say they are like.

Sirens sang to humans and they would drown them. . .
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Post by *Strongly*[Emo]tional 8/13/2009, 1:49 pm

that seems cool Smile
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Post by shadowsowner888 8/13/2009, 2:40 pm

Oh. xD Okay. Well, the drowning part makes it make more sense.
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Post by *Strongly*[Emo]tional 8/13/2009, 2:48 pm

yeah that part helps lol Smile
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Post by DreamCatcher81 8/15/2009, 2:50 pm

I have like several pages of notes, but here's like 5 random facts you might not already know

•Often confused with Sirens which were bird like creatures that sang to human men and killed them.
•Unable to leave water in mermaid form.
•Knack for falling in love with human men.
•Webbed fingers.
•First mermaid was also moon goddess so that is why the waves reach towards the moon causing tide, mermaids are drawn to the moon because they once were rulers of it.
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Post by shadowsowner888 8/15/2009, 7:56 pm

OMG. x3 That's super helpful! Thanks! *writing down*

xD Haha, if you don't mind, could you send me all those notes? Unless you have then written, not on the cpu. In which case I won't try to torture you.
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Post by iGrievous 8/15/2009, 11:27 pm

. . . Well, popular opinion on these mermaids, Dream, I would just make 'em say that most humans are weird and don't know right, then make up my own stuff.
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Post by DreamCatcher81 8/15/2009, 11:39 pm

Yeah. I made up a lot of stuff for BTW too besides the notes which is why I'm not posting all of it because of plagarisim. tongue
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Post by shadowsowner888 8/16/2009, 9:01 am

Lol, yah, I'm gonna end up making a lot of this stuff up. xD Even though I'm gonna not make up a lotta stuff, too.
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Post by *Strongly*[Emo]tional 8/16/2009, 10:50 am

yeah i can't wait Smile
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Post by shadowsowner888 8/16/2009, 2:30 pm

Oh, well I'm actually probably not going to post the rest. (Unless you guys really want me to . . .) Cus I'm writing it for Joe and Jamie, not to post.
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Post by Jinx 8/16/2009, 2:32 pm

Please!
I really want you to!
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Post by shadowsowner888 8/16/2009, 3:21 pm

Okai. Well, maybe, then. Knowing me, though, it might be a while before it's actually finished.
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Post by GirlBird18 8/17/2009, 5:03 pm

What you've got down so far, Shad, sounds really good! You should go for it Very Happy
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Post by shadowsowner888 8/17/2009, 6:19 pm

Thanks Robyn! Smile
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