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What should I name my mind-control book?

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Post by Cyn431 7/25/2010, 6:17 pm

I'm still not sure what to name my TWS novel—or at least it will be a novel at one point, or a novella. I think I've narrowed it down to a few things, though. So I was wondering if any of you could help me out and vote? (: 'Kay awesome. Here's a little summary.

I wrote:Lately the FBI has been conducting an illegal experiment [Painted Lady Initialization], which consists of abducting (once-)traumatized children and drugging them in order to give the child extensive Multiple Personality Disorder and the government near-complete mind control. One of the worst parts is how all of this goes unseen—but Cyndi Kate D'Aders doesn't intend to let that remain a true fact. After miraculously escaping the facility she'd been cooped up in, this thirteen year old girl teams up with the few others who've achieved the same goal through both similar and diverse means, along the while learning that runaways receive some bonus psychic powers. With the FBI chasing them down and haunting pasts weighing them down, these victims must break the silence and learn how to trust again.

—| Cyn
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Post by rattyjol 7/25/2010, 6:20 pm

Ohhhmygosh. That story sounds so good. xD You're gonna post it, right?

Anyway, I voted for Painted Lady and Painted. nod
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Post by Mrs. Jessi O'Shea 7/25/2010, 6:21 pm

I like painted. nod This seems like a good story, too. Wink
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Post by popcornkernel 7/25/2010, 6:30 pm

I remember you telling me about this. It looks so amazing! I can't wait till it's finished Very Happy

About the title I really like 'Painted'. I dunno why but when I see a book with a single word title, I just have to grab it.
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Post by Dragon Lover 7/25/2010, 6:33 pm

I agree with Pop! ^_^
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Post by Cyn431 7/25/2010, 6:43 pm

Thanks for voting everybody! Very Happy I didn't expect so many responses.
I also give my thanks for the many compliments on this sounding really good. ^^

Yes, this is getting posted. nod I have part of it written, but once I get a title figured out I'm going to be rewriting everything. Hopefully that'll catch me up on TwigWriSum.

Haha, nice one Pop. xD Books with one-worded titles are often pretty good, and if they're monstrously long.
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Post by amrgirl 7/25/2010, 7:53 pm

I like "Painted Lady." That sounds like a good story. Smile
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Post by Avé 7/25/2010, 7:55 pm

This sounds so exciting. o: I voted for 'Painted'.
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Post by Cyn431 7/25/2010, 8:29 pm

Thanks, both for the votes and the plot compliments! (:
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Post by Sundara 7/25/2010, 9:32 pm

"Painted Lady" seems the most intriguing. Smile I vote for that one.
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Post by shadowsowner888 7/25/2010, 9:47 pm

I voted the first option. And the last, though I like cookies and cream better than peaches and cream. nod
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Post by Cyn431 7/26/2010, 2:11 am

Thanks for the votes, guys! x3 And Muffin, same here. I've actually never had peaches & cream before, but it's what first came to mind.

Wow, the poll all of a sudden became a tight race. o: Eh, it'll be up for another sixteen hours. But if nothing changes the name will be Painted.
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Post by Komoda 7/26/2010, 2:30 am

Ah, this reminds me of an SRA article I once read. According to the reporter, this particular group of suspects would lock the children in cages with wolves so that they'd develop a multiple personality disorder. Something in there about impregnating young girls then cutting out the baby fetuses to eat and whatnot, too... o.e You never know what's just a rumor and what's real when it comes to stuff like that, though.

Anyway. On topic. I think Painted Lady sounds the best, personally. All of the titles are nice, though.
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Post by MarielofRedwall 7/26/2010, 10:08 am

I think that Painted Lady would be an interesting title.Smile
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Post by Taquito 7/26/2010, 10:40 am

Painted. :3
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Post by Cyn431 7/26/2010, 1:00 pm

Minus the cutting out and eating the babies part, that does sound like something that the people this story is based off of would do. xP Darn perverted slave handlers.

Thanks for voting everybody! :D Wow, it's still tight...
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Post by PugsRock 7/26/2010, 3:04 pm

Painted ladies. (:

And you better post this! (:
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Post by Cyn431 7/26/2010, 3:19 pm

Wow, it didn't take long for Painted Lady/ies to take the lead.

Thanks for voting, Pugs! x3 And yes, this is getting posted as soon as I finish the templates at my shop. It shouldn't take more than two hours for it to get up, or at least like a book-cover first post or something.
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Post by LuckyPenny666 7/26/2010, 3:25 pm

I voted for Painted Ladies.

Your story sounds so good and creative! I can't wait to read it. Smile
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Post by Cyn431 7/26/2010, 5:46 pm

Thanksies, Lucky. ^^

Okay, I'll be going with Painted Lady, considering I'm going to put up the thread for this now, but if something else takes the lead by the time the poll closes (it's got about half an hour left), then it'll change to that. nod
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Post by Johnny Gal 7/26/2010, 11:33 pm

I like painted lady. :)
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