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Post by iGrievous 8/12/2009, 1:49 pm

Here's a random song I wrote about hangin' around, waiting for band, so I can see her again. . .

Well, I'm in a fix these days,
When I think back it's a bunch of haze.
Can't seem to remember your face,
Makes my heart break.

Until I look into your eyes.
In my picture of you, it's my best possession,
My prize.

Prechorus
And I just wanna say,
Chorus
Hey, you, your hair, your eyes, your smile,
I've been thinking they were beautiful
All the while
I've known you.

Don't you know what you could do to me,
If you told me that you do believe
We could be.

It'd set me free.
(End chorus)

Well, September
Rolls in.
And my eyes are crazy, lookin' for you.
Please come soon.

And I think I'll die,
if I can't ever spot your eyes,
It's been awhile.
Now if I tried I couldn't smile.

Prechorus
I just wanna say,
Chorus
Hey, you, your hair, your eyes, your smile,
I've been thinking they were beautiful
All the while
I've known you.

Don't you know what you could do to me,
If you told me that you do believe
We could be.

Please set me free.
(End chorus)
Bridge
As I get up from my seat,
I start to freak.
Will you come around, or will you make me wait?
I tell myself to calm down, 'cause it isn't like this is a date.
My feet are staked,
To the ground.
Please come around!

(Then we go into this guitar solo, and afterwards, the bridge continues.)

Suddenly you walk into the room.
Now a new danger looms.
You walk to me and say hi.
Do I dare meet your eyes?
My heart, it melts into a lake.
If I tell you, will you make it break?
(End Bridge)
Prechorus
I say to you,
Chorus
Hey, you, your hair, your eyes, your smile,
They've been beautiful all this while.
Tell me this, could you believe,
Everything us two could be?
You whisper yes, it sets me free.

This of course is just a song,
But someday that fact,
it may be wrong.
You never know what you can accomplish when you keep that dream,
And just believe.


That's the end, but it's kinda corny.
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Post by Jinx 8/12/2009, 2:15 pm

Brilliant!
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Post by shadowsowner888 8/12/2009, 2:41 pm

x3 I love this! Haha, I can't believe you didn't let me read it before.
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Post by iGrievous 8/12/2009, 3:07 pm

I made it this morning.
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Post by iGrievous 8/12/2009, 3:07 pm

Thx, Black Cat. Very Happy
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Post by Webkinz-lover#1 8/12/2009, 5:10 pm

I like it, it's really nice. Very Happy
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Post by iGrievous 8/14/2009, 8:52 am

Thanks.
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Post by Arianna 8/14/2009, 9:05 am

Wow, it's really good!
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