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Post by Akeria 9/28/2009, 11:52 am

She's two years younger than me... But her birthday is soon. Smile It's February 2nd
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Post by rattyjol 9/28/2009, 12:20 pm

She's older that me. XD But younger than some of the kids in my class.
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Post by catbuster 9/28/2009, 2:57 pm

Akeria wrote:
catbuster wrote:Thanks Shad! Oh my goshness, that was a really cool chapter! Make the baby a girl and make Roxy get married to her boyfriend, I think you should do that but it's your story so I really can't keep you from doing what you want.

To be honest, this wasn't part of the original plot, but it works better than what I had planned. Very Happy You'll see what happens. Very Happy (Roxy's only 13... Don't forget. She can't exactly get married... Lol)
rattyjol wrote:Awesome new chapter! cheesy Aw, poor Roxy.

Yeah...
Oh right I forgot xD.
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Post by Akeria 9/28/2009, 3:24 pm

The chapter is finished.

Now I start a new one. Very Happy
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Post by rattyjol 9/28/2009, 3:43 pm

I hope it gets better for her. nod
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Post by Akeria 9/28/2009, 4:48 pm

[2.2.10]
Yeah, that whole "Write every few days" thing... How about that?

I'll give you a recap of the past... almost month

1. Roxy is almost finished with her first trimester, and she's just begun showing. She's still getting the annoying cravings...
2. Today is Roxy's birthday. She's 14.
3. My birthday is in exactly a month.
4. Nora and Brian set a date for their wedding: June 13th
5. Sydney met some guy, named Sam and they're going out.
6. Phoebe is much healthier, her hair is coming back in, and she looks adorable with short hair. She's back in school too.
7. My grades are much much much much much much much... much better. Like, way better.
8. Mom and Dad bought me a new puppy, I named her Shadow. She's another black lab. I love her.
9. Maggie and Jake are going out. Ugh...
10. Maggie and I aren't talking again.
11. I'm getting my permit in a month/I can drive now.
12. Kevin and I are going out.

Okay, I'm going to talk about each of these... Isn't it weird that more happened in one month then happened during three months the last time I "lost" my diary? It's kind of pathetic, how depressing and... weird I was then.

So, Roxy turned 14 today. We gave her a birthday party. Her "ex" boyfriend (She refuses to talk to him.) wasn't there, so it seemed to be nice. Kevin was there though. <3 <3 <3 But I'll talk about that later. Her annoying cravings are still... annoying, even though she'll be done with her first trimester in like, a week. She comes into my room, every other night, saying "Claire... Clairedelooooooooo, I want some chiiiiiips" So then I have to wake up and go; "The chips are downstairs. Go get them." and then she says; "But I want baaaaaacon chips!" and I say; "Bacon chips? Roxy, are you crazy? It's 2 A.M. Go wake up Sydney if you want bacon chips." And then she moans, and goes to wake up Syd. God! It's driving me and my sleep insane!!

My birthday is in a month. I'm turning 16. Woo! It's going to be great. Dad promised me that the second I turn sixteen, we're going to get my permit. Thank god! I can't wait to drive! It'll be great.

What else...

Oh, Nora's wedding. That's on June 13th. Lucky for her it's not a Friday. Why she would choose to get married on the 13th of any month I don't know, but... I think it's weird. She asked Sydney to be the maid of honor. "I would have chosen you, Roxy, but you'll be really pregnant by then..." She said. I'm glad to hear I wasn't even in the running for maid of honor... I am a bridesmaid though. We get to go shopping for a dress some time in March or April. Should be fun.

Can I just say, I don't like Syd's boyfriend. At all. I think he's skievy and gross, and smelly, and... mean! I don't like him! He's not nice to Phoebe, and I may or may not have screamed at him after he made Phoebe cry, saying things like "Oh, what would you know about saving money? You cost this entire family more than you'll ever know. Your leukemia meds don't grow on trees!" I really, really hate him. If I didn't go to church every Sunday, I would swear my brains off at him. Sydney likes him though, so maybe I should try a little harder to be friendly with him...

On the topic of Phoebe, and her leukemia, I can quite honestly say that she's doing much, much better. Her hair is coming back in, a little darker than it was, but adorable none the less. She's got a short, cropped haircut now, but it's really adorable, and it suits her very well. She's gained a little bit of weight, which is good, because she was starting to look pretty skinny. The only downside is, she's got mountains of homework to scale. Four months of absences will do that, I guess...

My grades have improved from C's to A+'s! I'm so excited! I actually made honor roll! Can you believe that? Mom and Dad couldn't believe it at first, but they warmed up to it, and they're thrilled now. I've been working really hard on my grades, one of the reasons why I haven't been writing as much as I should have. My English teacher actually pulled me aside and said; "Wow, Claire. Your grades, are amazing right now. Keep up the fantastic work!" I'm thrilled!

School would be just perfect, except for Maggie and Jake... They're disgusting! Seriously, anyone who kisses and is just... that... on-top of eachother is gross. I'm sorry, but Kevin and I really aren't like that. Well... We are, but not to the extreme. They are seriously gross at school though. They sit at our table, even though Maggie and I aren't talking, and she sits on his lap, playing with his hair, and he strokes her cheek, and then they make-out for God knows how long. It's annoying. But there is a reason why Maggie aren't talking. The day after Kevin asked me out, which trust me, I'll describe, but anyway, she came up to me and goes "Claire, I just don't understand why you would ever break up with Jake!" She said. I told her that at first it was just him, but then it was a mutual thing. She goes. "Well, you're a stupid person. I would have tried to get him back. He's just so amazing." And I asked why, and she goes, "Well obviously you know! He's an amazing boyfriend! Look here he comes!" And he came, and they started to make out, and I said "Well, I'm going to go, before I throw up." And Maggie got mad, swore at me, Jake calmed her down, and they walked away. This was before Kevin made my day though... <3 <3 Ooooh! I can't wait to tell you EVERYTHING, Diary!

I'll start from the beginning. Remember the day Phoebe came home? It was the last time I wrote. Well, Kevin slept up in my room that night, up in my bed. I slept on the couch. It was around ten when he woke up, I guess, and he was stroking the side of my face. I didn't open my eyes right away, because I liked it... He leaned in and kissed me. Well, I had to kiss him back, obviously... So... we may or may not have made out then. He's amazing. He kept whispering how much he liked me, how he wished he could spend all day with me.

We did spend all day together. After about a half an hour, we went downstairs and ate breakfast. He went up to take a shower, and I went after him. We decided that we were going to go to the mall, then the movies. So, we did. We shopped around. We went into a store called Forever 21, and he made me try on this dress. It's a light purple, and it's really tiny. It's got straps that come down, and it kind of fits around my chest, and then goes into an A-line skirt. It's pretty... He grabbed me a purple headband and stuck it in my hair, brushed a piece out of my face and said "You look beautiful. I'm buying it for you. He bought me black sandals too, and made me wear it all around the mall.

Then he made my day amazing. After that store, he asked me to lunch, so we went to the food court. We both bought our food, and then he went over and stood on a table. "Can I have everyone's attention?" He screamed. He looked down at me, and then looked at the rest of the food court. "This girl, right here, is the most amazing girl ever, and I think I'm in love with her." He said. He stepped down and looked at me. "It's true." Then he got on one knee, and held my hand, kissing it gently. "Claire Summers." He said, my heart was fluttering at ten times the normal limit. "Will you go out with me?" He asked. I said yes, and then he kissed me, as half of the food court went "Awwwww!" It was... magical. That's a good word.

We've been going out for nearly a month now. I can't believe that it's such a long time...

But that night, I got to sleep over at his house (We didn't tell our parents, and it's really not unusual for us to sleepover each-others houses. We stayed up until three in the morning, then slept for three before having to wake up school. It was really nice to talk for that long, and occasionally kiss. I took a shower at his house in the morning, and then we went to school.

Dance has been pretty good lately. Kevin's solo in December was amazing, not quite sure if I mentioned that... Life is still going well. Roxy just knocked on my door... I guess she wants something to eat.

-Claire.
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Post by rattyjol 9/28/2009, 4:55 pm

Whoooo, Team Clevin! cheesy Haha, I love the food court thing. XD
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Post by Akeria 9/28/2009, 4:57 pm

xD My ex-boyfriend did that to me. nod

Team Clevin for the win. Very Happy
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Post by rattyjol 9/28/2009, 4:59 pm

Nice. XD I would be, like, so mortified, even if I did like the guy. XD
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Post by Akeria 9/28/2009, 5:07 pm

I loved it.
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Post by catbuster 9/28/2009, 7:24 pm

TEAM CLEVIN!!!! I am so happy you made them go out Akeria, that was a fantastical chappie! Did you make those team Clevin badges yet?
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Post by Webkinz-lover#1 9/28/2009, 7:34 pm

Ah, you need to slow down. xD
I need to go and read like 10 out of 14 pages. Razz
Then again, I've been slacking at keeping up with stories. :]
I like it so far (from what I've read. xD).
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Post by Akeria 9/29/2009, 12:45 pm

Wooo! Thanks. Very Happy
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Post by Arianna 9/29/2009, 1:17 pm

I love the new entries! I got sort of behind, but I love where the story is going.
One last thing...
Team Clevin!
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Post by Akeria 9/29/2009, 2:02 pm

Very Happy I think that's what everyone's thinking.
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Post by shadowsowner888 9/29/2009, 4:14 pm

Yay!! Very Happy That was awesomeness! (Both the new part and the rest of the old part.)

I'm gonna comment on individual parts now. Very Happy

1. Roxy is almost finished with her first trimester, and she's just begun showing. She's still getting the annoying cravings...
Oooh! Roxy's a fatty! xP

4. Nora and Brian set a date for their wedding: June 13th
I have a feeling that date means something to me . . . >.>

8. Mom and Dad bought me a new puppy, I named her Shadow. She's another black lab. I love her.
I was like, "OMG! =D" That's my favorite part, haha. x3 And I looooove that it just so happens to be number eight . . .

12. Kevin and I are going out.
OMG YESSSSS! Very Happy TEAM CLEVIN WINS!!

"But I want baaaaaacon chips!"

hysterical Man, I hope I'm not that annoying whenever I'm pregnant.

Then he made my day amazing. After that store, he asked me to lunch, so we went to the food court. We both bought our food, and then he went over and stood on a table. "Can I have everyone's attention?" He screamed. He looked down at me, and then looked at the rest of the food court. "This girl, right here, is the most amazing girl ever, and I think I'm in love with her." He said. He stepped down and looked at me. "It's true." Then he got on one knee, and held my hand, kissing it gently. "Claire Summers." He said, my heart was fluttering at ten times the normal limit. "Will you go out with me?" He asked. I said yes, and then he kissed me, as half of the food court went "Awwwww!" It was... magical. That's a good word.
*IS. SO. STINKING. JEALOUS* Yay for Claire, but now I just feel deprived. xD I hope my first bf does something like that . . . if he does, I'll probably be so embarrassed, but like grinning my head off at the same time.

But that night, I got to sleep over at his house
Oooooh la la! smug
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Post by Akeria 9/29/2009, 4:19 pm

Total coincidence that it's number 8. o.O Lol.

And about the baaaaaaaaaaaaaacon chips, my brother was whining, and he was like "No! I want potaaaaaaaaaaaaaaato chips" and it gave me inspirationnnnnn. Very Happy
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Post by shadowsowner888 9/29/2009, 5:42 pm

xD Nice.
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Post by Webkinz-lover#1 9/29/2009, 9:40 pm

Woo, I caught up last night, and this is my new, favoritist story! Smile
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Post by Noah the Flood 9/29/2009, 10:25 pm

Hahah, for a second I thought you said the puppy was Shade and I was like "OMG! xD" But thats a good name...I think I had a cat named Shadow..I forget xD

But yay for Claire and Kevin! I find it totally funny though, that his name is Kevin, cause my name is Noah Kevin (Not my last name, thats my full first/middle name xD) xDD
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Post by Horsey 9/29/2009, 10:34 pm

Awesome Story! Very Happy
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Post by Akeria 9/30/2009, 3:01 pm

Thank you. Smile

And Noah, I read your nicknames, and I decided I'm going to call you No-Hah from now on. ;D It's what I call my little brother, who's name is Noah.
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Post by shadowsowner888 9/30/2009, 4:11 pm

OMG, nice, Snakey. xD For a second I thought you actually meant your last name though, lol!
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Post by Nightowl 10/2/2009, 6:09 pm

I like everything so far, Akeria. I haven't posted in a while though... xD Sorry!
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Post by Akeria 10/3/2009, 4:43 pm

Smile Thanks.
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