HELP? -- partial song

by **FOREIGN?!** 9/20/2009, 3:26 pm

Hey, I got this inspiration last night and I had to scrawl this down. It's a song about.. well, you'll see. ;)
Comments, please! I wrote it at midnight last night, and I was sick, so it might not be that stellar. :O

yeah, yeah.
It's been said she's trouble and a little too far fetched
Barely more than a doodle, less than a sketch.
She's a one in a million, a real piece of work.
She's trying to help, oh so much that it hurts.

She's an american beauty on the wrong side of the tracks.
A crooked little smile that's hard to not give back.
I swear she's in trouble, and always has been.
Because she's working to hard, spreading herself too thin
She's been trying to find her fairy tale endin'
life's taken her for a spin..

CHORUS
The words could've been written on her face screaming out "will you help me?"
"I'm in dyer need and I've got some self assembly"
"I'm not looking for perfection, I don't know what that could be"
"But I'm not trying to be something that really isn't me."
"I just don't want to be that girl you easily forgot."
"I sure hope you don't think that I'm asking for a lot."
"Just give me a chance, I know I don't look like much but you'll see."
"I mean, what could be worse than me?"

(then there's another verse, but I'm still brainstorming and editing the lyrics, so it is not here yet. ENJOY THE BRIDGE. (: )

BRIDGE
She's half the face in the mirror you see everyday
She's what you try to get rid of, but she tends to stay.
She's the little voice of question, and the blush you fight
She's the slip in your stumble, a sleepless night.
A tear in your eye and your little weak side..

The words could've been printed on her face screaming out "will you help me?"
"I'm in dyer need and I've got some self assembly"
"I'm not looking for perfection, I don't even know what that might be"
"But I'm not trying to be something that really isn't me."
"I just don't want to be that girl you easily forgot."
"I sure hope you don't think that I'm asking a for lot."
"But if you'd just give me a chance, I'll keep my promises, you'll see"
"I mean, what could be worse, what could be worse, what could be worse.. than.. me?"

There you go, folks. :)
EDIT: i fixed it up some. i had forgotten all the errors I left in there. :O IWILLPUTDOWNTHATOTHERVERSEIWROTEAS SOON AS I FIND MY MAGICAL NOTEBOOK. :suspect: