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Post by Arianna 10/16/2009, 1:38 am

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Maturity: Someone dying.
Fantasy: Not much

This reminds me of this short story by someone, with the hourglass. Someone on here... I can't remember who it was. xP

My breaths
Get shallower
I cannot
Breathe
The air
Is seldom
and in
between
I'm getting
scared now
I want
to see home
I want
my goodbyes
all
to be known
But that
Won't happen
I'm dying
Here
As I take
my last breath
My grave
lies near
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Post by shadowsowner888 10/16/2009, 4:25 pm

I think Nightowl had the hourglass story? xD I'm not so sure either, now that I think about it.

That's really . . . like, wow. Great job. Very Happy I can almost feel the POV-person's last breaths.
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Post by DreamCatcher81 10/16/2009, 8:49 pm

Wait, me, you, and Keri wrote one with the Dana girl! That one was awesome but no one else wrote anymore.
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Post by littletoes101 10/16/2009, 8:56 pm

wow. awesome
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Post by rattyjol 10/16/2009, 10:10 pm

Awesome! Very Happy

Night did the hourglass one.
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Post by Arianna 10/17/2009, 1:44 am

Ooooh, I gotta go tell Night, then. Smile
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Post by DreamCatcher81 10/17/2009, 12:49 pm

Oh nevermind then. I read Night's story but I haven't been on in awhile so I never saw it. I know we did do one about an hourglass though. You guys should go to the contest section and write some more guys! Haha.
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Post by Arianna 10/17/2009, 12:50 pm

That contest went to the archives, I think. Sad
Oh well. xP
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Post by DreamCatcher81 10/17/2009, 12:51 pm

Awe. I'll go make a post and get it out then!!! Hahahahaha.
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Post by Arianna 10/17/2009, 12:59 pm

Awesome!
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