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Post by Novastare 2/19/2010, 11:14 pm

Breath, Breath take a breath,
Here it comes, it's time for death.
Matador take your swing,
I knew in life, what life would bring.
I was born to do this now,
I feel the blood run down my brow.
I can hardly see a single sight,
All I see is death's drawing bite.

Breath, Breath, take a breath,
here he comes, give him death.
I try my best, I run to kill,
he dodges fast and I fall still.
I hear the crowed, the sickening sound,
What monsters hold my ounce endless bounds.

No please don't, don't come again,
My eyes are dimming and my breath is thin
I feel a sharp pain go through my skin,
I feel my life begin to dim.

Please oh those who look upon,
Save me from these nightmares of wrong!
Won't you stand? Won't you help?
No, I'm done, these creatures ignore me,
It's time for this bull to finally see.
I know my time draws nine,
I dream of the meadow with my own kind.
I see the grass so green and full,
I feel so alive, I feel like a bull!


Then as my heart seems to dream,
I hear a faint and ugly scream.
It seems to come from my own flesh,
It seems I have no time left.
Breath, Breath, take a breath,
I slowly slip into death.

I see a meadow, a paradise,
My father is here and he tells me to rise.
He puts his hand upon my head,
He says don't worry this is the end of your dread.
I smile and see the world once more,
I know where I go no pain I will endure.

Breath, Breath, take a breath,
At last it's time, for my death.
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Post by shadowsowner888 2/19/2010, 11:35 pm

Beautiful, Nova, just beautiful. Smile The rhythm is perfect, and you have great style!
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Post by Novastare 2/19/2010, 11:37 pm

Thanks, I feel inspired to do a bunch. Lol, I had better save my inspiration for later days when I have none. Smile Thanks so much for posting, your a great leader!
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Post by shadowsowner888 2/20/2010, 12:25 am

Aw, thank you! ^^ You're welcome.
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Post by Novastare 3/10/2010, 9:09 pm

It's kind of funny, I like to read old poetry that I've wrote too. I'll go back on ones I did a long time ago and edit them.
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Post by Avé 3/10/2010, 9:31 pm

This. Is. Amazing. o__0
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Post by Novastare 3/10/2010, 11:18 pm

Thanks!
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Post by FOREIGN?! 3/11/2010, 9:59 am

This poem is s t u n n i n g. Very Happy The flow and everything is just perfect. nod
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Post by Novastare 3/11/2010, 12:17 pm

Thanks so much!
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 3/18/2010, 2:32 pm

Wow! This is PURE GENIUS! cheesy
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Post by Novastare 3/18/2010, 7:27 pm

Thanks so much!
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