Her heart was broken by a killer some call love
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Noah the Flood
Komoda
rattyjol
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Avé
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Her heart was broken by a killer some call love
Hands touch
Hearts beat
Eyes close
Lips meet
This moment, I'm loving this
Please just seal it with a kiss
Sun sets
Moon shines
Now you're
All mine
Forever remember the moments with you
But never will they ever be true
Wake up
Just dreams
Not what
It seems
Snapping back into the reality of life
Causing my heart unending strife
Hoping
For Love
Can't Get
Enough
Why won't you come back, it'll be a fresh start
And if you do, please bring the other half of my heart
Hearts are
Broken
Words left
Unspoken
You're feeling surrounds me
It heals me, it drowns me
So much
Given
Not enough
Forgiven
I thought I was good, I thought I was right
Please forgive me, just give me tonight
Eyes open
Tears fall
Heart seems
So small
I have to wonder if you did ever really love me
Was I trapped and you finally decided to set me free?
Hands touch Hands fall
Hearts beat Hearts stop
Eyes close Eyes see
Lips meet What the heart does not
I know that the day will come when it's healed
But our eyes witnessed what our kiss never sealed
Yup yup yup. Enjoy.
Hearts beat
Eyes close
Lips meet
This moment, I'm loving this
Please just seal it with a kiss
Sun sets
Moon shines
Now you're
All mine
Forever remember the moments with you
But never will they ever be true
Wake up
Just dreams
Not what
It seems
Snapping back into the reality of life
Causing my heart unending strife
Hoping
For Love
Can't Get
Enough
Why won't you come back, it'll be a fresh start
And if you do, please bring the other half of my heart
Hearts are
Broken
Words left
Unspoken
You're feeling surrounds me
It heals me, it drowns me
So much
Given
Not enough
Forgiven
I thought I was good, I thought I was right
Please forgive me, just give me tonight
Eyes open
Tears fall
Heart seems
So small
I have to wonder if you did ever really love me
Was I trapped and you finally decided to set me free?
I know that the day will come when it's healed
But our eyes witnessed what our kiss never sealed
Yup yup yup. Enjoy.
Avé- Best-Selling Author
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Re: Her heart was broken by a killer some call love
Aww, that's so sad! Made me tear up a bit... Great job! (:
Re: Her heart was broken by a killer some call love
Aw, that's sad... Great poem, though.
rattyjol- Best-Selling Author
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Re: Her heart was broken by a killer some call love
That's amazing! Very sad, of course, but incredibly well written. I love the format.
Komoda- Best-Selling Author
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Re: Her heart was broken by a killer some call love
Wow...Thats an amazing poem..sad but amazing.
It sounds like it could easily be turned into a song, which is really cool
It sounds like it could easily be turned into a song, which is really cool
Noah the Flood- Best-Selling Author
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Re: Her heart was broken by a killer some call love
Wow...
I'm listening to the piano version of forever and always and I read this... and now I feel really depressed.
What an amazing poem. I think this will make the featured poem for December.
I'm listening to the piano version of forever and always and I read this... and now I feel really depressed.
What an amazing poem. I think this will make the featured poem for December.
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Re: Her heart was broken by a killer some call love
Thanks!
I just want to shorten the title a little...
I just want to shorten the title a little...
Avé- Best-Selling Author
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Re: Her heart was broken by a killer some call love
But I love the title! :3* / A V V Y wrote:Thanks!
I just want to shorten the title a little...
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Re: Her heart was broken by a killer some call love
Aw, that's amazing. Good job.
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Re: Her heart was broken by a killer some call love
This is amazing, Ave. :3 Great job . . . it's so sad, but so awesome. xD I totally love the poem.
Re: Her heart was broken by a killer some call love
Thanks you guys.
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