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Her heart was broken by a killer some call love

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Post by Avé 11/10/2009, 2:26 am

Hands touch
Hearts beat
Eyes close
Lips meet

This moment, I'm loving this
Please just seal it with a kiss


Sun sets
Moon shines
Now you're
All mine

Forever remember the moments with you
But never will they ever be true


Wake up
Just dreams
Not what
It seems

Snapping back into the reality of life
Causing my heart unending strife


Hoping
For Love
Can't Get
Enough

Why won't you come back, it'll be a fresh start
And if you do, please bring the other half of my heart


Hearts are
Broken
Words left
Unspoken

You're feeling surrounds me
It heals me, it drowns me


So much
Given
Not enough
Forgiven

I thought I was good, I thought I was right
Please forgive me, just give me tonight


Eyes open
Tears fall
Heart seems
So small

I have to wonder if you did ever really love me
Was I trapped and you finally decided to set me free?


Hands touch Hands fall
Hearts beat Hearts stop
Eyes close Eyes see
Lips meet What the heart does not

I know that the day will come when it's healed
But our eyes witnessed what our kiss never sealed


Yup yup yup. Enjoy. Smile
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Post by DiscardedHarmony 11/10/2009, 3:08 am

Aww, that's so sad! Sad Made me tear up a bit... Great job! (:
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Post by rattyjol 11/10/2009, 11:59 am

Aw, that's sad... Great poem, though. Smile
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Post by Komoda 11/10/2009, 2:23 pm

That's amazing! Very sad, of course, but incredibly well written. I love the format. Smile
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Post by Noah the Flood 11/10/2009, 3:34 pm

Wow...Thats an amazing poem..sad but amazing.
It sounds like it could easily be turned into a song, which is really cool
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Post by xSophiexx16 11/10/2009, 3:46 pm

Wow...
I'm listening to the piano version of forever and always and I read this... and now I feel really depressed. Very Happy
What an amazing poem. I think this will make the featured poem for December.
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Post by Avé 11/10/2009, 6:26 pm

Thanks! Very Happy

I just want to shorten the title a little...
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Post by Jinx 11/10/2009, 6:28 pm

Oooh...It's a gorgeous poem.
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Post by Komoda 11/10/2009, 6:32 pm

* / A V V Y wrote:Thanks! Very Happy

I just want to shorten the title a little...
But I love the title! :3
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Post by DiscardedHarmony 11/10/2009, 6:49 pm

No, don't change it! The title is awesome Her heart was broken by a killer some call love 606178
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Post by PugsRock 11/10/2009, 6:53 pm

Aw, that's amazing. Smile Good job.
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Post by shadowsowner888 11/10/2009, 10:39 pm

This is amazing, Ave. :3 Great job . . . it's so sad, but so awesome. xD I totally love the poem.
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Post by Avé 11/10/2009, 10:52 pm

Thanks you guys. Smile
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