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Post by DreamCatcher81 8/10/2009, 5:43 pm

Maturity: Romance, kissing

Fantasy: Um. . . None I don't think! xD

My Poor Broken Heart

The rain falls,
From the sky.
Lands on
My broken face.
No one sees the tears.
No one knows my pain.
No one knows it’s there.
It washes away all the stains.
It heals my broken heart.
The rain falls harder,
Drenching the land,
Drenching me.
Why me?
Why you?
You didn’t mean it did you?
All those loving words,
Washing down the drain,
Following the current of the rain.
I turn and jump as a something moves,
And it is you coming around the corner.
Why you?
Why are you here?
You take my hands in yours.
I want to run.
I want to fight.
But I can’t.
I stand frozen as you bend your head.
No, No,
I scream in my head.
But I make no move to stop you.
You’re lips meet mine.
All is perfect
In that little second.
But then you straighten up.
There is pain in your eyes.
“I’m sorry.
I’m sorry.”
Then you turn around
And walk away.
The rain falls harder.
Drenching the land,
Drenching me.
Why me?
Why you?
The rain washes away my tears,
And drowns out my whimpers,
But it cannot heal my heart.
My poor broken heart.
I gave it to you and you broke it in half,
And left it on the sidewalk,
To wash down the drain,
Following the current of the rain,
Along with all your love.


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Post by DreamCatcher81 8/10/2009, 5:44 pm

It's really long. . . But oh well! xD
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Post by shadowsowner888 8/10/2009, 6:22 pm

Sad Aww, that's so sad! Awesome job.
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Post by DreamCatcher81 8/10/2009, 6:26 pm

Haha thanks!!! I think. . . cheesy
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Post by PugsRock 8/10/2009, 6:28 pm

Aw, that's really good. Smile
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Post by DreamCatcher81 8/10/2009, 9:11 pm

Thanks!
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Post by Arianna 8/11/2009, 1:47 am

It's good but really sad Sad
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Post by DreamCatcher81 8/11/2009, 4:12 pm

Thanks!
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Post by Komoda 8/11/2009, 10:50 pm

Omg... I'm tearing up. Sad
That was good, Dream! I loved it.
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Post by DreamCatcher81 8/12/2009, 12:29 pm

Haha. Thanks Komoda!
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