My beautiful angel, i miss you

My angel

You left too fast,
too soon

We all tired to understand,
but couldn't

We were shocked at our lost,
so numb

Once you were gone,
I couldn't breath

There were many tears shed for you,
so many sleepless nights

But once you are gone,
there was no come back

Now I finally understand,
what you have become,
My Angel

I miss you

Aw, good job.

You need the maturity and fantasy ratings, though.

Sorry! Here is what it is suppose to be:

Maturity: sadness, loss

Fantasy: None

and thanks!

You need to add those in the top of the thread, too, Wolf.

I like your poem! It's so sad . . . makes me think about what's gonna happen when my dog dies, cus her name's Angel. Hopefully she's got a good ten years left, though.

OMG, that's so sad... Lovely!

thank you