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Post by Malicious Nightmares 1/4/2010, 9:57 pm

Maturity: Average
Fantasy: Average

My 5 W's poems, that we're for school. One based on Lazuri, another based on Zureya. [RP charries]

ZUREYA;

The young warrior
unsheathed her knife
at the silent dawn of the day
beyond the darkened forest,
waiting for the battle to take place.

LAZURI;

The battle-scarred elven queen
gazed at the darkened sky
as midnight had fallen
standing beyond the gates to her kingdom,
awaiting the soul of her deceased daughter.

Now, this is my random poem;

You thought you could help me
You thought I was fine
You've already forgotten
You've already been warned

I'm not here to help you
I'm not here to bring you misery
I'm here to put you out of it
I'm here to put an end to you

HOPE YOU ENJOYED!
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Post by Komoda 1/5/2010, 6:02 pm

Ooh, I love them all, Mia! Especially the last one. Great job! Did your teachers like them?
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 1/5/2010, 7:16 pm

Thaaank you! :3
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Post by shadowsowner888 1/5/2010, 11:28 pm

I believe you mean, "Maturity: Mia - Fantasy: Mia" nod

I don't know who Zurey and Lazuri are, though I've heard a lot about Lazuri in your siggies. xD But I have to say I like the last one best - the style of the top two is really cool, though. :3
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 1/6/2010, 12:04 am

Naw. Average doesn't equal to "Mia". High does. X3

Thanks! Yeah. Teloren x Lazuri... my all-time fav RP couple. X3
Pssh. The top two we're for school. 5 W's poems HAVE to have to following;

-Answer the following questions in order; Who, What, When, Where and Why.
-5 lines
-Tell a story
-Not rhyme

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Post by shadowsowner888 1/6/2010, 12:24 am

Aw, okay. xD But maybe you meant averagely Mia!
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 1/6/2010, 7:43 am

Lawl.

X3
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Post by Avé 1/9/2010, 1:06 pm

These are really good, Mia! Very Happy
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 1/9/2010, 1:42 pm

Thaaaank you. :3
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