My Love for Hate

The small hat fluttered,
buzzing in my ears.
The soft sand wrapped around my feet;
it makes me feel like I can live again.
Earth is turning as it goes to sleep,
I rest my head on the ocean floor.
If I survive, I'll love hate forever.
My eyes close slowly, images fading.
Love for Hate.

<3 I love this! It's so... I don't know how to describe it. Peaceful, in an almost eerie way?

Lovely poem, Becca! It's sweet and simple and perfect.

Eek, that's really good! Reminds me of Owl City.

Thank yew ave, Fore! and Kumori Sundavhor.... I appreciate it! xD I'm writing it into a song, it'll be really good.

Oooh, awesome. :3 You should record it and post you singing it when it's done!

Eh, it ain't too good. What I'll do is black out the camera (I don't want my face online) and record it then. Along with my friends that are in chorus, but since I'm in band, I might also post it in clarinet form. Then it'll go up for canditation.... and I'll rule the world!!!! xDD