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Post by PugsRock 10/28/2009, 9:13 pm

Maturity: Not much... love, hate.
Fantasy: None

The 'sequel' to I Love You

I hate you
I'm sorry
But I know it's true

I used to think about you in my sleep
Wishing my dreams would come true
Now you're in my nightmares, creep!

I thought you were amazing
But you're a jerk
Had my mind going completely beserk

I was foolish to love you
Too young, too stupid
What am I supposed to do?

You don't love me
You're a jerk
You and I can never be

Made me cry
Why should I have to?
Boys shouldn't make you do that

I hate you
I'll never love you
How could I have thought my love was true?

It's not good. I wrote it in 2 minutes, while my parents were screaming at me. Bye.
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Post by shadowsowner888 10/28/2009, 9:25 pm

Awww. Sad If this is true, I'm so sorry, Pugs. *huggles* (And I think it's good. Smile)
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Post by Mrs. Twarry Matsuda 10/28/2009, 9:36 pm

I'm with Shad, you are awesome, and I wish I was you. (^^)
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Post by Mrs. Amazon E Cullen 10/29/2009, 5:59 pm

Great job!

I agree with everyone Smile Poems can start from everything. Some poems need more time to write, but some need less Smile Just like humans, all poems are different Wink
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Post by shadowsowner888 10/30/2009, 5:07 pm

Why, thank you, Twarry! Very Happy (^^' Lol, now you see why I put my name as that.)
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