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DIE {I hate myself}

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Post by Crystal Aura 5/12/2010, 5:20 pm

DIE {I hate myself} Die_mi10


I hate myself for this
I hate this person I’ve become
I hate who I am and who I thought I would never be
I hate the selfishness I have now become
I hate the endless pain I put people through
I hate the way I hide myself in this pain
I hate the crazy world I’m living in called my life
I hate when my friends suffer because of my problems
I hate the fact that everything I’ve worked so hard not to be is what defines me
I hate that people can’t see who I really am
I hate that my heart is broken with no one to put it back together

But I shall not hate you
Even if I have to
How can I hate you,
Whom I have loved so devotedly
And so unreservedly?
Yet I do...

I hate you for this excruciating pain I barely endure every night.
I hate you for the constant rain my soul must fight.
I hate you for being there so now I’m doomed to miss and remember.
I hate you for giving me reason to care for what happened back in September.
I hate you for saying goodbye and leaving me not knowing what to do,
But most of all,
I hate you for letting me cry ’cause I can’t be your friend
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Post by Avé 5/12/2010, 5:25 pm

Izzie, this is sad. D: But it's wonderful, like all of your poems!
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Post by Crystal Aura 5/12/2010, 5:25 pm

ARRRRGGHHH! No one even gets the message! This isn't sad, this is life.


Ugh. Thanks.
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Post by Hyro201 5/12/2010, 6:13 pm

Its sad wheather its life or not.
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Post by shadowsowner888 5/13/2010, 10:26 pm

I agree with Hyro. I totally get it's your life, but this poem is still sad, and really good. smiley I'm sorry you're still feeling upset like this, though. *huggle*
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