Poem by: Bee
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Poem by: Bee
by sweettee11 6/4/2010, 6:30 pm
This is a free-verse
My heart has been broken
And it shall never be whole
You were a part of me, myself, and I
but you stole that away
I couldn't believe someone could be so cruel
But now I know that it was you
You left me alone
Believing no one cared
The frown is fading
And you have left my mind
My smile is returning
And I don't need you anymore
And it shall never be whole
You were a part of me, myself, and I
but you stole that away
I couldn't believe someone could be so cruel
But now I know that it was you
You left me alone
Believing no one cared
The frown is fading
And you have left my mind
My smile is returning
And I don't need you anymore
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Re: Poem by: Bee
by shadowsowner888 6/4/2010, 10:05 pm
Aw, good job, Bee! ^^ The last stanza really wraps it all up and makes for a satisfying poem.
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