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Post by Imagine 2/16/2010, 2:29 pm


A
[Poem] A Day


Do you think I can do it?

Maturity: Varried, but there will probably be some dark stuff, death, and romance.
Fantasy: Also varried, but there will most likely be magic or ghosts and stuff.

Feel free to comment and stuff. I'll put the date above the poem. And if you see any spelling mistakes, please tell me! =)




2/16/10


Frozen

A boy on a bike,
A girl sitting on his handle bars,
Hair flying,
Head back,
Eyes dancing,
Laughter.
The sounds of early spring,
Birds,
Someone shouting,
"Smile!"
The flash of a camera,
The tell-tale click,
And the love, a photograph, is frozen in time.

Shivering,
Eyes lids heavy with sleep,
Desperation.
Seeping red,
Marring the perfectness of the snow.
Jarring,
Wrenching,
Pain.
Cold winds,
Beautiful snow,
Only bringing fear and paralysis.
Eyes shut, lips blue.
And a life, cut short, frozen in time.

Happiness,
Flooding everything with a warmth,
A birthday cake,
Children laughing.
"Happy birthday to you!
Happy birthday to you!"
Flashes of color,
Laughter and singing.
A hug.
Another and another,
Bursts of ecstatic noise.
Innocent joy.
And the memory, etched forever in your mind.

Frozen in time.

[That actually turned out better than I expected.]

2/17/10

[There's some violence in this one...]

Freak


I could've sworn I was wide awake,
Sitting quietly on the couch.
But the next thing I knew,
I was alone in a cage made entirely out of glass.

And people passed by me,
Laughing and pointing,
Studying me.
"Freak!" Someone shouted.

I could barely hear them through the glass.
"Why?"
"What's wrong with her?"
Another asked curiously.

"Can't you see?
She's not like us!
Different.
Strange
."

Anger raged through me.
I walked up to the wall.
I hit it with my fist.
I shouted.

"Hey!
Hey!
I can hear you!
There's nothing wrong with me!"

The crowds drew back,
Shocked,
Pulling children away,
Covering their mouths.

"Security!"
Someone shrieked.
"What's wrong with her?"
"What's she doing?"

My face turned red.
My blood soared,
Red hot through my veins.
I kicked the glass.

It shattered.
I jumped out,
On to the path.
"Help!"

Screaming now.
"Security!"
Men came towards me carrying guns.
Pointed at my chest.

"Get back in the cage,
Freak."
"Get away from those humans."
The pushed me back.

"No!
I'm not a freak-"
Bang.
Bang.

Blood soaking my chest,
I stumbled backwards.
"Why?"
"Why?!"

"We don't want you here,
Freak.
People could see you are different."
A guard hissed in my ear.

He kicked me backwards.
"People can't know,
That they can be different.
Different like you."

He sneered as I bled.
"For safety,
You see.
Everyone must be the same."

"NO!"
Bang.
Bang.
My eyes slipped shut.

I woke up on the couch.
Breathing hard.
I touched my chest.
No blood.

No.
But a wound.
And I was changed.
I will be different.

I am a freak.

[Sorry for the extreme longness, I got carried away!]



2/18/10

Look Up

I
Shut
My
E
y
e
s.

But
Never
Can
I
Find
P
e
a
c
e.

The world,
Clashing and banging,
The constant media stream,
The bright flashing lights,
Instant headaches disguised in neon glows.

The constant multi-tasking,
In your face,
High speed,
Connectivity.

And behind our technology-rich backs,
They are at work.
Robbing us,
Of our liberties,
Because we don't bother to look up.

The glowing faces of phones...
Computers...
TVs...
They suck us in.
They brainwash us.

LOOK UP!
Can you here me?
The time is now,
We are the future of the world.
Us children, hypnotized,
By what ever screen they put in front of us.

LOOK UP!
Don't let your future slip by,
Be taken away,
Because we would not fight back.

We may be small.
But we can make a heck of a lot of noise.
And everyone will hear us.
Because WE are the future.

So,
L
o
o
k
U
p.

[Wonderfull randomness about how adults are brainwashing us. xD]


Last edited by Imagine on 2/18/2010, 7:06 pm; edited 7 times in total (Reason for editing : I can't spell. xP)
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Post by xSophiexx16 2/16/2010, 2:30 pm

Wow. O.O
I really like this poem.
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Post by Imagine 2/16/2010, 2:32 pm

Thankiez! =D

I LOVE LOVE LOVE your av and sig! The Beatles are amazing! I saw your sig pic and was like, "Oh, Paul." *sighz*
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Post by xSophiexx16 2/16/2010, 2:36 pm

Imagine wrote:Thankiez! =D

I LOVE LOVE LOVE your av and sig! The Beatles are amazing! I saw your sig pic and was like, "Oh, Paul." *sighz*

XD
Thank you! Oh my, Paul is -sigh- amazing. I love him. <3
The Beatles rock. [pun!]

Anywho - Thank you. x) Sorry for getting off-topic!
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Post by Imagine 2/16/2010, 2:39 pm

xD Yes. He is.
You are very punny.

I'm sorry, that was really cheesy.
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Post by Arianna 2/16/2010, 2:41 pm

That's really good, Imagine. (: I can't wait to see what the result of this is.
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Post by Imagine 2/16/2010, 2:42 pm

Thanks, Arianna!
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Post by Avé 2/16/2010, 4:48 pm

This is lovely. :3
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Post by Imagine 2/16/2010, 5:01 pm

Thanks, Ave! =)
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Post by shadowsowner888 2/16/2010, 7:31 pm

Woah! Frozen is beautiful. Smile Wonderful job, Alice.
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Post by Imagine 2/16/2010, 7:55 pm

Thanks, Shadow. =)
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Post by Imagine 2/17/2010, 6:48 pm

I added todays poem to the first post!

Warning: It be very long.
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Post by Avé 2/17/2010, 7:04 pm

I love love love love love love love love love (please excuse the excessive "love"s) your newest one. Seriously. =D
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Post by Imagine 2/17/2010, 7:06 pm

Aw, thanks, Ave! =)

Just wondering, how do you say your username? When I read it, I'm not sure if it should sound like Ay-ve or Ah-ve or Aw-ve.

xD
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Post by Avé 2/17/2010, 7:10 pm

A lot of people think it's like Abe, though with a V instead of the B. It's actually pronounced like... Avvy or Avvie. An A, as in apple, and then vee. Avee. xD
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Post by Imagine 2/17/2010, 7:13 pm

Oh! I now get it! xD
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Post by Avé 2/17/2010, 7:15 pm

Yay. :3
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Post by shadowsowner888 2/17/2010, 7:30 pm

Woah. :3 Freak is beautiful. It's like there's a moral in there!

(I always pronounced your name like the end of have, Avvy. xD)
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Post by Imagine 2/17/2010, 7:30 pm

Thankee, Shadow.
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Post by Imagine 2/18/2010, 7:07 pm

Today's poem is added to the front! =D
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Post by shadowsowner888 2/19/2010, 9:51 pm

Adults are brainwashers. They deserve to die, and then the rest of us can all go off to Neverland before we turn eighteen. nod

x3 That was an epic poem. "hypnotized by whatever screen they put in front of us" is a particularly great line, I think, cus it's so true. xD Screens are hypnotic.
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Post by Imagine 2/19/2010, 11:32 pm

Thanks Shadow! Yes they are.

I have a poem today but it's at home on my desk and I won't be home till Monday, so I'll post this weekends poems then. =D
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Post by shadowsowner888 2/20/2010, 12:30 am

All right! Very Happy I can't wait to see it.
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