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Post by xSophiexx16 3/27/2010, 9:12 pm

Maturity - Medium, I guess.
Fantasy - A little bit, maybe.
Uh, I'm not sure if this even counts as a poem.. It doesn't rhyme at all, and it's not really a story It's sort of poetic, I suppose... I think this may be 'Free Verse'. Anyways, here it is.

A Poem.

A drop of sadness hits the floor.
No one dares to touch.
A weary girl drops to the ground.
No hope left in her soul.

A fear of sorts grows inside.
No one stops the hurt.
The girl has grief fill her life.
No way will she stay sane.

A wisp of air, a white mist
No one sees it but her.
The soul of the departed one
The girl cries for it.

It passes by, pays her no heed.
The girl’s screams pierce the air.
There’s no one to stop her cry.
Nothing for her to depend on

The girl, after so much mourning,
Feels weight lift from her heart.
She floats up to the departed soul.
She’s happier there.
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Post by Avé 3/27/2010, 10:38 pm

This is really sad. x[ It's really good, though, Sophie - you've got a lot of talent.
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Post by xSophiexx16 3/28/2010, 12:55 am

Thank you very much, Ave. x)
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Post by shadowsowner888 3/28/2010, 9:02 am

Poems can be pretty much anything, so yah, this is a poem. A very good one at that, too. :3
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Post by xSophiexx16 3/28/2010, 11:36 pm

shadowsowner888 wrote:Poems can be pretty much anything, so yah, this is a poem. A very good one at that, too. :3

Thanks, Shadow.
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