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My First poem

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Post by blkoehn 11/21/2009, 12:21 am

I got bored and made a random poem its not to fancy ,but maybe you see some humor in it.
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Little Rodent Monster

Little feet running around,
a little chirping clicking sound,
a big shadow full of fear,
the sound is coming near,
then all of a sudden you see a cat,
who in fact tripped over a mat,
then all of sudden you spotted the beast,
the cat is getting ready to have a feast,
because the beast is a rat,
This cat will become fat.
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Post by Komoda 11/21/2009, 1:19 am

Aw, it's very cute. :3 Great job!
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Post by DiscardedHarmony 11/21/2009, 1:20 am

Heh, that's awesome! xD
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Post by shadowsowner888 11/21/2009, 8:41 am

Lol, nice!! xD You did a good job with the rhymes!
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Post by PugsRock 11/21/2009, 8:50 am

Good job! Smile I love the rhymes.
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 11/21/2009, 3:47 pm

Lawl.

Awesome. :3
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Post by Mrs. Amazon E Cullen 11/21/2009, 3:52 pm

I love the rhyming Smile

Nice work Very Happy
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