Universal Journey

by Rai 6/22/2010, 10:45 pm

I want to jump from star to star
Look at Jupiter from afar
Be able to cup the Sun in my hands
Jump back onto earth && safely land

I want to swim across Neptune
Jump across, onto the moon
Slide across Saturn's rings
Then lift up on gorgeous wings

I want to dance on the raging sun
Sit in the dipper, the bigger one
Find hidden chambers in the moon
Sing a soft & silent tune

I want to search the space that is unknown
Go into the twilight zone
Fly and land onto Mars
Then jump off, and land in the stars

I want to fly in this endless space forever
Continue on this wonderous endevour
But everything has to end, however
Who cares, just as long as we're together?

- - - - -

I might change the ending. Razz

-rai

by **shadowsowner888** 6/23/2010, 5:29 pm

That's so wonderful and sweet, Rai! ^^ I especially love the parts about wings and flying. Because wings are beautiful, and who doesn't love flying? :3

And personally, I wouldn't change the ending. Very Happy

(Though personally, I think it's a little hard to read how you say "however" at the end of the one line and "though" at the beginning of the next. Like, I understand what you're saying, and it works, but at the same time, it's a little confusing, considering they're the same sort of word. If that makes any sense. xD)