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The Pain that Made Me Insane *finished*

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Post by shadowsowner888 6/9/2009, 11:22 am

Here's another little song! XD

Maturity: PG
Fantasy: None


Livin’ in my own world,
Tryin’ to find a perfect place
Where I will know, that I can go, away.

Needin’ to get a perfect chance
To make things right and live my life
In my own stance; It’d be enhanced; I’m not a lowlife.

CHORUS
O-oh I just wish you’d know
The pain that made me insane.
You’ve frozen the flow
Of my veins,
Of my soul.

I will never escape
The searing erosion.
I need my space,
I need the sun to
Melt the freeze away.

I will never forgive, oh no-o-o-o-oh.
(End chorus)

All you do, it stabs me through.
Your slashing words, and cutting asserts.
I’ll say adieu, I wish you knew, of all this hurt.

Chorus
O-oh I just wish you’d know
The pain that made me insane.
You’ve frozen the flow
Of my veins,
Of my soul.

I will never escape
The searing erosion.
I need my space,
I need the sun to
Melt that freeze away.

I can never forget, oh no-o-o-o-oh.

Bridge
Someday I’ll leave,
And never come back.
I know you won’t grieve,
Your heart is far too black.

But please just know one thing:
I know you never wanted me.
So I’ll just leave you and give you peace,
And set my life back on track.

Let go and leave me alone.

O-oh, I just wish you’d know
The pain that made me insane.
You’ve frozen the flow
Of my veins, of my soul.

I will never escape
The searing erosion.
I need my space,
I need the sun to melt your freeze away.

Let’s say you’ve been forewarned.
I won’t let you make my heart so torn.


Ooooo-oooooh! I just wish you’d know
The pain that made me insane.
You’ve frozen the flow
Of my veins, of my soul.

I will never escape
The searing erosion.
I need my space,
I need the sun to melt your freeze away.
To melt your freeze away.
I will never give up . . . until I retrieve my sanity.
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Post by DreamCatcher81 7/6/2009, 5:36 pm

This is good Shadz! xD
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Post by SaddleClub 7/8/2009, 12:20 pm

After reading the first line, a High School Musical song started playing in my head. XD Anyway, great job!! (as usual....XD)
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Post by DreamCatcher81 7/8/2009, 6:01 pm

Haha. Omg that happened to me too! "Livin in my own world, didn't understand! That anything can happen if you take a chance." And that's all I know! xD
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Post by iGrievous 7/9/2009, 8:17 am

Gaah! I hate HSM!
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Post by shadowsowner888 7/9/2009, 9:12 am

Thanks peeps! XD Lol, yeah, when I first wrote this I just put that line there in, and didn't realize until later the HSM stuff. I just kept it, lol, cus it's not like plagiarism or anything, especially since the rest of the song has nothing to do with the HSM one. XD And cus I came up with it on my own. I don't even picture the same tune.
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Post by SaddleClub 7/9/2009, 5:34 pm

I don't think this is anything like the HSM song, it just got stuck in my head after I read the fist line. XD And swelcome, by the way. Smile
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Post by shadowsowner888 7/10/2009, 11:49 am

XD Lol, that's good.
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Post by DreamCatcher81 7/10/2009, 12:03 pm

Yah 'cuz it was just one line and its not like HSM owns it. It's pretty unique.
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Post by shadowsowner888 7/10/2009, 1:31 pm

Thanks. Smile
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Post by DreamCatcher81 7/10/2009, 1:58 pm

Swelcome! LOL. Sorry Saddle but I had to steal it! xD
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Post by PugsRock 7/12/2009, 9:40 am

Nice job! Smile
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Post by shadowsowner888 7/12/2009, 9:44 am

Thanks. Very Happy
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