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Post by Komoda 6/27/2010, 3:28 pm

Leather coated innocence
Flowing down the drain
Thriving off of the suspense
Drama’s her cocaine


Strapped herself to the guillotine
Driven to die in vain
She dare not ask for morphine
Indulging in the pain

Elegant fuchsia prom gowns
Concealing the fishnet
Senseless blurry vodka rounds
Replacing the tea set


The days drag by without question
She wishes she could forget
Bloody session after session
She drinks away the regret

Another seductive whisper
From her once so tender lip
Always purring at his whimper
As he feels the needle's nip
Sadistic and unforgiving
Emitting heartless sighs
But her spirit's still there living
Behind her puppy eyes
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Post by Rai 6/27/2010, 3:42 pm

o-o
This is really amazing! You really do have talent. nod
Great job, Komoda! applause
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Post by Komoda 6/27/2010, 3:52 pm

Aww, thanks so much, Rai! :3
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Post by Avé 6/27/2010, 4:14 pm

Woah, Mo. This one is completely amazing. *-*
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Post by Komoda 6/27/2010, 4:37 pm

Thanks so much, Avvy! ^^
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Post by Horsey 6/27/2010, 4:45 pm

I love it =D
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 6/27/2010, 4:48 pm

Geez, Mo. This is like... epic. *-^ <---- Do we WANT to know what happened to that smiley? XD
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Post by Puckspaw 6/27/2010, 5:31 pm

Wow, amazing job, Mo! nod
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Post by Komoda 6/27/2010, 9:09 pm

Horsey wrote:I love it =D
Thank you, Horsey! :33

Malicious Nightmares wrote:Geez, Mo. This is like... epic. *-^ <---- Do we WANT to know what happened to that smiley? XD
Aw, thank you, Afi! And erm... Well, it looks like it's going "ooh, shiny" and winking at the same time? XD

Puckspaw wrote:Wow, amazing job, Mo! nod
Thank you very much, Pucks! ^u^
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 6/27/2010, 9:40 pm

Komoda wrote:
Horsey wrote:I love it =D
Thank you, Horsey! :33

Malicious Nightmares wrote:Geez, Mo. This is like... epic. *-^ <---- Do we WANT to know what happened to that smiley? XD
Aw, thank you, Afi! And erm... Well, it looks like it's going "ooh, shiny" and winking at the same time? XD

Puckspaw wrote:Wow, amazing job, Mo! nod
Thank you very much, Pucks! ^u^

"OOH! SHINY KITTY."
New caption for that smiley. XD
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Post by shadowsowner888 6/28/2010, 7:24 am

That's really good, Komoda. :O All the color fades make it look even cooler, too . . . and that bit about the drama reminds me somewhat of myself. XD
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Post by Komoda 6/28/2010, 12:17 pm

shadowsowner888 wrote:That's really good, Komoda. :O All the color fades make it look even cooler, too . . . and that bit about the drama reminds me somewhat of myself. XD
Thanksies, Ado! ^^ And yeah, I think a lot of us could relate to that here, considering we're writers... ^^;

Malicious Nightmares wrote:"OOH! SHINY KITTY."
New caption for that smiley. XD
applause That sounds about right!
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Post by shadowsowner888 6/28/2010, 5:48 pm

Yes! Because the drama is just delicious! cheesy
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