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Saddened Eyes

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Post by imushu 7/17/2010, 10:42 pm

((Ello everyone! I wrote this while on the plane home. I was missing writing. So, this is my "Welcome back me" poem! I know you missed meh :3 Wink ))

Saddened Eyes


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I look in your eyes,
Your saddened eyes,
Solemn,
Empty,

I wonder why,
Why are your eyes so sad?
Do they know?
Did they find out?

When you cried,
When you weeped,
As you sat in dismay,
Your eyes saddened that day,

You ran away,
But you smiled,
You smiled to yourself,
Receding from view,

A grin creeped up your face,
Beaming in sight,
Even though the smile was maniacal,
Your eyes stayed saddened,

Looking down,
Smiling down,
You laughed that day,
Knowing you would be free,

And all that was heard,
Was your cackling,
Under the sky,
With your saddened eyes
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Post by Avé 7/18/2010, 11:39 pm

Oh my god, I love this so much. Nice job!
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