The Writers Guild
Twig has now moved to this address.

Join the forum, it's quick and easy

The Writers Guild
Twig has now moved to this address.
The Writers Guild
Would you like to react to this message? Create an account in a few clicks or log in to continue.

If you like writing, this is the place to be!

The site can be accessed at http://www.twigwriters.com/forum

Suicide Note

4 posters

The Writers Guild :: Compositions :: Poems

Go down

Suicide Note Empty Suicide Note

Post by conich 7/9/2010, 3:43 pm

The pain makes it dull; the pain makes it better
Why I’m doing this, I wrote it all in a letter
For someone to read to understand why
And also why I couldn’t say goodbye

If I had waited to long, if I had gone to you first
You wouldn’t understand, you’d make it all worse
You would beg me not to, when the choice has been made
You would have cried on my shoulder and beg that I stayed

So I’m leaving right now, as soon as I’m done
I’m getting up and getting the gun
The life I live hurts to much to bare
So I’m taking my life, there’s no one to care


Last edited by conich on 7/9/2010, 3:52 pm; edited 1 time in total
conich
conich
Novelette Scribe
Novelette Scribe

Female Posts : 749
Join date : 2010-07-06
Age : 28

Back to top Go down

Suicide Note Empty Re: Suicide Note

Post by MusicWritingLove 7/9/2010, 3:45 pm

The pain makes it dull; the pain makes it better

Woah...just, woah.

Oh, and I think you meant to put choice instead of chose, but still, it's AMAZING.
avatar
MusicWritingLove
Novelette Scribe
Novelette Scribe

Female Posts : 982
Join date : 2010-04-24

Back to top Go down

Suicide Note Empty Re: Suicide Note

Post by FOREIGN?! 7/9/2010, 3:46 pm

This poem absolutely blew me away. Fantastic job. *-*
FOREIGN?!
FOREIGN?!
Novel Creator
Novel Creator

Posts : 2425
Join date : 2009-09-17
Age : 913

Back to top Go down

Suicide Note Empty Re: Suicide Note

Post by Rai 7/9/2010, 3:52 pm

Woah. *-*
This is really excellent! Very Happy
Amazing job. 83
Rai
Rai
Novella Composer
Novella Composer

Female Posts : 1321
Join date : 2010-06-18
Age : 523

Back to top Go down

Suicide Note Empty Re: Suicide Note

Post by conich 7/9/2010, 3:54 pm

Thanks Music! I went back and corrected that little typo. Thank you too Foreign and Rai! It means alot to me that other people like my poems Very Happy
conich
conich
Novelette Scribe
Novelette Scribe

Female Posts : 749
Join date : 2010-07-06
Age : 28

Back to top Go down

Suicide Note Empty Re: Suicide Note

Post by Sponsored content


Sponsored content


Back to top Go down

Back to top

- Similar topics

The Writers Guild :: Compositions :: Poems

 
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum