Just Words
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Sorry I haven't put up anything else recently. I've been really busy with school, and haven't had time to post anything. But I have been writing in my notebook at night, and I have a lot of poems xD. Most of them are crap but I found a few to post here.
Fairy Breath:
Your eyes entrance me,
and every tender kiss makes my heart explode.
You are made of fairy breath,
and angels sighs.
Tinkling bells and light summer showers,
make me think of you.
Please, oh please, smile,
and make the sun come out.
You chase away the rain clouds,
and rainbows arrive instead.
Where did you go?
Now my heart is still,
and the sighs of angels have left.
Those rain clouds are back;
rainbows are but a distant memory.
Why did you leave?
Sweet Lies:
You stole her breath,
You took it and she collapsed.
I stand in the corner
helpless.
I fight these shackles as you lure her closer.
You killed her with your dancing untruths,
killed her with your sweet lies.
I stare at her, lying on the floor.
Then turn my head away,
as you walk towards me.
Ravens:
There is a raven perched on her heart,
squeezing with black talons,
squeezing until all that was of her,
leaves.
Beady eyes and sharpened claws,
tear through her fragile armor,
and steal her soul.
Dark wings are growing in her heart,
taking her resolve.
She lies there,
strangled,
and wonders why she cared.
Again:
I'm crying out to you.
Are you there?
Do you care?
I can't find you,
I lost you.
I'm not whole without you.
Come back, I left.
Please,
forgive me again.
Yup, that's pretty much all that wasn't horrible x]
Fairy Breath:
Your eyes entrance me,
and every tender kiss makes my heart explode.
You are made of fairy breath,
and angels sighs.
Tinkling bells and light summer showers,
make me think of you.
Please, oh please, smile,
and make the sun come out.
You chase away the rain clouds,
and rainbows arrive instead.
Where did you go?
Now my heart is still,
and the sighs of angels have left.
Those rain clouds are back;
rainbows are but a distant memory.
Why did you leave?
Sweet Lies:
You stole her breath,
You took it and she collapsed.
I stand in the corner
helpless.
I fight these shackles as you lure her closer.
You killed her with your dancing untruths,
killed her with your sweet lies.
I stare at her, lying on the floor.
Then turn my head away,
as you walk towards me.
Ravens:
There is a raven perched on her heart,
squeezing with black talons,
squeezing until all that was of her,
leaves.
Beady eyes and sharpened claws,
tear through her fragile armor,
and steal her soul.
Dark wings are growing in her heart,
taking her resolve.
She lies there,
strangled,
and wonders why she cared.
Again:
I'm crying out to you.
Are you there?
Do you care?
I can't find you,
I lost you.
I'm not whole without you.
Come back, I left.
Please,
forgive me again.
Yup, that's pretty much all that wasn't horrible x]
Last edited by DiscardedHarmony on 11/20/2009, 1:59 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Grammer problems xD)
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I love the metaphors you're using!! Great job, on all four of these. I especially liked Sweet Lies.
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Yeah, I've been trying to use a few more metaphors, cuz my poetry has come across a little blunt to me. Thankeys! x]
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You are so amazing
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Oh, thank you Bay It's wonderful that you think so, as I don't xD
Daisy's:
We were clean,
unblemished,
and innocent.
Sweet and pure.
Like daisy's in a summer rain,
we swayed in the breeze of life.
Our knuckles grazed each other,
and you smiled.
I looked into your eyes,
and I felt like I couldn't breathe for
their perfection.
You gently kissed my forehead,
and told me it will be alright.
I wonder what happened.
You don't say those things,
you never kiss me.
You never make me feel amazing,
instead you drag me down.
We are daisy's no more,
instead blackened roses.
I hate this.
Daisy's:
We were clean,
unblemished,
and innocent.
Sweet and pure.
Like daisy's in a summer rain,
we swayed in the breeze of life.
Our knuckles grazed each other,
and you smiled.
I looked into your eyes,
and I felt like I couldn't breathe for
their perfection.
You gently kissed my forehead,
and told me it will be alright.
I wonder what happened.
You don't say those things,
you never kiss me.
You never make me feel amazing,
instead you drag me down.
We are daisy's no more,
instead blackened roses.
I hate this.
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It's not very good I guess, but I was inspired
A Dropped Rose Petal:
One drop.
Just one vermilion drop.
Sitting like a dropped rose petal,
or a fragment of apple skin.
Scarlet,
against a snow-white counterpane.
Fresh and innocent,
it is the key to the mystery.
A simple dab of ruby holds a persons
fate in it's composition.
So simple,
this drop holds my fate.
A Dropped Rose Petal:
One drop.
Just one vermilion drop.
Sitting like a dropped rose petal,
or a fragment of apple skin.
Scarlet,
against a snow-white counterpane.
Fresh and innocent,
it is the key to the mystery.
A simple dab of ruby holds a persons
fate in it's composition.
So simple,
this drop holds my fate.
Last edited by DiscardedHarmony on 11/25/2009, 1:01 am; edited 1 time in total
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Flames:
Bang!
The door slams shut.
I sit on my bed and sob.
More heated words flew out of my mouth,
and yours.
Why do we scream like this?
Why are we destroying this?
I don't want to turn your face red,
I don't want to watch my words shrink
you.
But I am shrunken myself.
Flames surround us,
but later they die,
and we are left wondering,
why we did this again?
Poison words flow over us,
and I die a little inside.
Bang!
The door slams shut.
I sit on my bed and sob.
More heated words flew out of my mouth,
and yours.
Why do we scream like this?
Why are we destroying this?
I don't want to turn your face red,
I don't want to watch my words shrink
you.
But I am shrunken myself.
Flames surround us,
but later they die,
and we are left wondering,
why we did this again?
Poison words flow over us,
and I die a little inside.
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As I Fall:
The world is ending around you,
it's all crumbling beneath our feet.
Yet you don't seem to care.
Caught up in your world,
you forgot mine.
Brushed aside,
passed over,
a piece of dirt am I?
You stare blankly at the wall,
not listening,
not caring,
not even watching as I fall.
Done:
I'm done with these lies.
Break through the wall,
and tear down the curtain.
This blindfold must go;
no more cobwebs blurring my vision.
I will break out of the mold,
and be free.
Give me the truth,
enough of these candy-coated myths.
You thought it would go down easier,
but I'm choking on the fake exterior.
I'm done with these lies.
The world is ending around you,
it's all crumbling beneath our feet.
Yet you don't seem to care.
Caught up in your world,
you forgot mine.
Brushed aside,
passed over,
a piece of dirt am I?
You stare blankly at the wall,
not listening,
not caring,
not even watching as I fall.
Done:
I'm done with these lies.
Break through the wall,
and tear down the curtain.
This blindfold must go;
no more cobwebs blurring my vision.
I will break out of the mold,
and be free.
Give me the truth,
enough of these candy-coated myths.
You thought it would go down easier,
but I'm choking on the fake exterior.
I'm done with these lies.
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My first attempt at a song xD
Painted Cheer:
Every morning she puts on her mask,
of happiness and smiles.
And nobody stops to ask
if she's OK.
Test grinning in the mirror,
she goes on her way.
She smiles and everyone believes,
in her painted cheer.
And no-one ever stops and sees
that one, small tear.
She hides it, oh so well,
with a smile and a laugh.
But before the party she fell,
and wallowed in her pain.
She smiles and everyone believes,
in her painted cheer.
And no-one ever stops and sees
that one, small tear.
For the holidays she's brave,
and seems to have a ball.
She will always behave,
and act like she's alright.
Put on a front,
and lipstick smile.
Laugh and wave
and nobody will ever suspect
that she's not okay.
She smiles and everyone believes
in her painted cheer.
And nobody ever stops and sees
that one, small tear.
She smiles,
Put's on a front,
Laughs and waves,
But she's not okay.
She smiles and everyone believes,
in her painted cheer.
And no-one ever stops and sees
that one, small tear.
That one, small tear.
And nobody ever stops and sees
that one, small tear...
Painted Cheer:
Every morning she puts on her mask,
of happiness and smiles.
And nobody stops to ask
if she's OK.
Test grinning in the mirror,
she goes on her way.
She smiles and everyone believes,
in her painted cheer.
And no-one ever stops and sees
that one, small tear.
She hides it, oh so well,
with a smile and a laugh.
But before the party she fell,
and wallowed in her pain.
She smiles and everyone believes,
in her painted cheer.
And no-one ever stops and sees
that one, small tear.
For the holidays she's brave,
and seems to have a ball.
She will always behave,
and act like she's alright.
Put on a front,
and lipstick smile.
Laugh and wave
and nobody will ever suspect
that she's not okay.
She smiles and everyone believes
in her painted cheer.
And nobody ever stops and sees
that one, small tear.
She smiles,
Put's on a front,
Laughs and waves,
But she's not okay.
She smiles and everyone believes,
in her painted cheer.
And no-one ever stops and sees
that one, small tear.
That one, small tear.
And nobody ever stops and sees
that one, small tear...
Last edited by DiscardedHarmony on 11/26/2009, 3:06 pm; edited 1 time in total
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I have more, but this is the only one I feel like posting at the moment xD
Paper Balloons:
Paper balloons
and weightless suns
are what my heart is made of.
Clouds of silver
and stars of gold
float above our heads.
Creamy
yet dreamy
I must be sleeping.
A delicate picnic
of perfection in food.
I must be floating.
You smile
I dream
we laugh in unison.
All worries seem to fade.
Jumping on beds,
dancing in meadows.
Fairy dust,
made of dreams,
grace's your face.
Content here,
we're happy.
But we forgot one thing.
Our hearts are made,
of paper balloons.
Paper Balloons:
Paper balloons
and weightless suns
are what my heart is made of.
Clouds of silver
and stars of gold
float above our heads.
Creamy
yet dreamy
I must be sleeping.
A delicate picnic
of perfection in food.
I must be floating.
You smile
I dream
we laugh in unison.
All worries seem to fade.
Jumping on beds,
dancing in meadows.
Fairy dust,
made of dreams,
grace's your face.
Content here,
we're happy.
But we forgot one thing.
Our hearts are made,
of paper balloons.
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That seems to have a deeper meaning behind it . . . like, they broke each others hearts or something. xD And it was all too easy.
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You:
Because of you,
I cannot sleep,
for fear you haunt my dreams.
Because of you,
I wander restlessly.
My eyes open,
but not seeing.
You chase me,
and I run
Because of you,
I jump at a whisper,
and a shadow turns my face ashen.
Because of you,
I shrink and hide.
I compact,
and withdraw from you.
And you wonder what you did!
But I cannot tell you;
I'm too busy running.
Because of you,
I cannot sleep,
for fear you haunt my dreams.
Because of you,
I wander restlessly.
My eyes open,
but not seeing.
You chase me,
and I run
Because of you,
I jump at a whisper,
and a shadow turns my face ashen.
Because of you,
I shrink and hide.
I compact,
and withdraw from you.
And you wonder what you did!
But I cannot tell you;
I'm too busy running.
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Roller-Coaster:
Why do I love you?
I hate you.
Yet I cling to you,
as you abuse me.
I ride this roller-coaster,
one more time,
just to reach the top and watch you
smile.
For one moment,
it's all right.
Then the roller-coaster drops,
and I with it.
I hate you.
Why do I love you?
Why do I love you?
I hate you.
Yet I cling to you,
as you abuse me.
I ride this roller-coaster,
one more time,
just to reach the top and watch you
smile.
For one moment,
it's all right.
Then the roller-coaster drops,
and I with it.
I hate you.
Why do I love you?
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Back Again(in need of a better title xD):
I can breathe again.
The suffocating silence is broken.
I relax,
expand,
smile once more.
I can't believe I sank so far.
Slowly I rise,
maybe not far enough.
As I fall again I wonder;
How many times shall I ride this cycle?
When does it end?
Then I'm at the bottom again.
It's time,
to fight back to the surface.
I can breathe again.
The suffocating silence is broken.
I relax,
expand,
smile once more.
I can't believe I sank so far.
Slowly I rise,
maybe not far enough.
As I fall again I wonder;
How many times shall I ride this cycle?
When does it end?
Then I'm at the bottom again.
It's time,
to fight back to the surface.
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