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Post by SkyLight 1/26/2010, 1:06 am


*~LOST IN THE MOMENT~*

You lay outside
Look up at the sky
The deep blue so dense

You close your eyes
the sun warms your face
The cool breeze is gentle comfort
Like a blanket lined with lace

The grass is gently blowing.
The sun shines beams through the trees
The perfect day
The perfect time

Perfectly comfortable
Perfectly right
Perfectly sound
Problems out of sight

You close your eyes
You gently sigh
And you realize

Your lost in the moment.
And your okay.


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Post by shadowsowner888 1/26/2010, 8:02 pm

Beautiful. ^^ I love it.
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Post by SkyLight 1/26/2010, 9:51 pm

Thankyou so much. It reminds of some of the times in my life that you just feel perfectly, happy. Smile
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Post by SkyLight 2/3/2010, 1:22 am

I added color to my poem!
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Post by shadowsowner888 2/3/2010, 7:22 pm

Woah! Very Happy The color adds a touch of extra emotion . . . that's so, so cool. I might try that some time. :3
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Post by Avé 2/3/2010, 9:45 pm

This is beautiful! I love the color. ;D
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Post by SkyLight 2/7/2010, 11:21 am

Thanks. Smile I thought the color was a nice touch. Smile
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