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Post by Love Is Dead 7/9/2010, 10:27 pm

~~~
My greatest fear was losing you
But now that you are gone
My heart just feels so empty
There's nothing inside at all
And even though I'm broken
Somehow I make it through
But I'm not sure how much longer
'Cause I can't breathe without you
~~~

Again, not one of my best. This isn't really recent. Razz But more to come, I suppose. ^___^
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Post by conich 7/10/2010, 9:00 pm

This is pretty Katie! Shorter than most, yes, very pretty Very Happy
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Post by Love Is Dead 7/10/2010, 9:05 pm

Thank you! Very Happy Yeah, I wrote in during the day and I always write better at night xP It would've been longer had it been like, midnight. xD
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Post by conich 7/10/2010, 9:12 pm

Lol! I'm kind of the same way. I've always thought that i should have been born some nocturnal animal cause I'm always more awake at night nod



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Post by Love Is Dead 7/10/2010, 9:16 pm

Haha me too. Like, on the weekends, I can stay up as late as I want and I usually don't go to bed until 4-5:30 xD Sometimes, I'll write poetry and It'll come out real good, but only if I'm feeling like, a strong emotion. Razz
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Post by conich 7/10/2010, 9:47 pm

Nice! I havent gotten to sleep before 5 am the past week! I am very tired right now! Do you mind checking out my poem? It's called Only A Word. thanx Very Happy
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