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Post by Mordor 3/26/2010, 11:56 am

This is a short poem I thought of while dancing in the rain Yesterday.
Enjoy.





To walk a storming shore,
To walk in old age lore,
To watch the raindrops pour,
To have it evermore.

I sit amongst the liars,
With no need to inquire.
Refuse to bank the fire,
Were need dire.

Dream a dream that's glossed,
Have it at a cost ,
Forget and it melts like frost,
Your dream's been lost.


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Post by FOREIGN?! 3/26/2010, 2:13 pm

Ooh, great poem. Very Happy The formatting really makes it fun to read, Kathy. grin
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 3/26/2010, 3:49 pm

Wonderful! ^w^

I love everything about it. The "flow", the formatting, the rhymes- as I said. Everything!
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Post by shadowsowner888 3/26/2010, 4:38 pm

Ah man, that's awesome, Kat. Very Happy The formatting and the words.

I'd call it Lost Dreams or something, but that's just me. xD
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Post by Mordor 3/26/2010, 10:53 pm

Thanks everyone! I'm glad you like it.
I had fun with the formatting xD

Ooh, that's a good name, Shadow. Thanks -puts up title-
I think my favorite part was 'I sit amongst the Liars'. Mainly 'cause 'liars' is huge xD
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Post by Erinbeth 3/29/2010, 11:07 am

Wow dude Love love love the POEM! WOot!
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Post by xSophiexx16 3/29/2010, 11:14 am

I really like this. (: It's very good.
I think you meant to put 'pour' instead of 'pore' though.
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Post by Mordor 3/29/2010, 11:16 am

Thank Erin xD Glad you like it.

Thank you Sophie!
D: For commenting AND pointing that out
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