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Poetry & Songs
by Selene Hime 2/25/2010, 6:26 pm
XD, well ... I thought I'd chance posting some of my poetry here. I don't really write as much of it as regular literature, so take it as you will. Any opinions will be much appreciated, though.
Maturity: Varies, sometimes medium.
Fantasy: Varies, sometimes medium.
Original-Base Poetry
Form
Missing You
How Can I?
Soaring
Blue Eyes
Fox Fire
Spring
Dividing Lines
Freeform
Universe
Haiku
Kitsune Moon
Kitsune Moon (Draft II)
Fanpoetry
Legend of Zelda: Into the Shadows
Legend of Zelda: Warrior of Shadows
Legend of Zelda: Shroud to Light
Yugioh: Envoy to the Moonlight Maiden
Elemental Gelade: Katana no Kaze (Sword of Wind)
Songs
Sparrow's Call
Sapphire Skies
Maturity: Varies, sometimes medium.
Fantasy: Varies, sometimes medium.
Original-Base Poetry
Form
Missing You
How Can I?
Soaring
Blue Eyes
Fox Fire
Spring
Dividing Lines
Freeform
Universe
Haiku
Kitsune Moon
Kitsune Moon (Draft II)
Fanpoetry
Legend of Zelda: Into the Shadows
Legend of Zelda: Warrior of Shadows
Legend of Zelda: Shroud to Light
Yugioh: Envoy to the Moonlight Maiden
Elemental Gelade: Katana no Kaze (Sword of Wind)
Songs
Sparrow's Call
Sapphire Skies
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Re: Poetry & Songs
by Selene Hime 2/25/2010, 6:27 pm
Based off of a combination of astrological myths, though the idea randomly appeared. ^_^
Universe
Gentle caress of the moonlight, harsh brand of the sunlight.
By the star's light, plight of the solar system ignites.
People of the sun, people of the moon.
War and strife, or peace and light?
Stand and fight, or leave from sight?
Stars and planets unite, but for what right?
To defend the universe, a common enemy born.
Rest not, or risk the fate of the torn.
Universe
Gentle caress of the moonlight, harsh brand of the sunlight.
By the star's light, plight of the solar system ignites.
People of the sun, people of the moon.
War and strife, or peace and light?
Stand and fight, or leave from sight?
Stars and planets unite, but for what right?
To defend the universe, a common enemy born.
Rest not, or risk the fate of the torn.
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Re: Poetry & Songs
by Selene Hime 2/25/2010, 6:47 pm
Ave wrote:Gosh, Selena -- Universe is really good.
XD, thank you. *Huggles* Was there anything in particular you liked about it? ^_^
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Re: Poetry & Songs
by Selene Hime 2/25/2010, 11:39 pm
Well ... I'm back with a poem I just wrote a few days ago, XD. While it is fanpoetry, the involved characters only make game appearances (as cards). It's something I just couldn't get out of my mind, so here is the final result.
Characters:
Moon Envoy
Maiden of the Moonlight
Lunar Queen Elziam
Envoy x Maiden
Characters:
Moon Envoy
Maiden of the Moonlight
Lunar Queen Elziam
Envoy x Maiden
Yugioh: Envoy to the Moonlight Maiden
Warrior though I may be,
Crescent glaive brightly gleaming.
It is not whereaupon I see,
Naught but darkness lies seeming.
Pinpricks of gentle light,
Auburn tresses adorned by the night,
White aura, your only magical might,
Protectress granting evening sight.
So few glimpse your ivory wings,
Or see your continuing devotion.
Only our graceful Queen hears what you have to sing,
Gentle words turned into enrapturing motion.
Though we both guard a light of dusk,
Delivering what is considered just,
I admired what is not a must,
Watching your starfall dust.
Time and conflict come to pass,
We each surviving with little more than life.
Yet naught can surpass,
What blooms from strife.
No longer forced to be repressing,
Softly, slowly expressing,
Finally free of distressing,
Offering a silver band of Queen's blessing.
Warrior though I may be,
Crescent glaive brightly gleaming.
It is not whereaupon I see,
Naught but darkness lies seeming.
Pinpricks of gentle light,
Auburn tresses adorned by the night,
White aura, your only magical might,
Protectress granting evening sight.
So few glimpse your ivory wings,
Or see your continuing devotion.
Only our graceful Queen hears what you have to sing,
Gentle words turned into enrapturing motion.
Though we both guard a light of dusk,
Delivering what is considered just,
I admired what is not a must,
Watching your starfall dust.
Time and conflict come to pass,
We each surviving with little more than life.
Yet naught can surpass,
What blooms from strife.
No longer forced to be repressing,
Softly, slowly expressing,
Finally free of distressing,
Offering a silver band of Queen's blessing.
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Re: Poetry & Songs
by Selene Hime 2/26/2010, 12:15 am
rattyjol wrote:Whoaaa... Amazing.
*Huggles* Thank you. ^_^
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Re: Poetry & Songs
by FOREIGN?! 2/26/2010, 9:54 am
Wow, they're both amazing! I especially loved Universe. 
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Re: Poetry & Songs
by Selene Hime 2/26/2010, 10:29 am
foreign wrote:Wow, they're both amazing! I especially loved Universe.
Thanks for commenting, and I'm glad that you enjoyed them. ^_^
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Re: Poetry & Songs
by Selene Hime 2/26/2010, 2:02 pm
shadowsowner888 wrote:Ooh, lovely job, Selene.
Thanks, Shadow. ^_^ *Huggles*
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Re: Poetry & Songs
by Selene Hime 3/1/2010, 3:10 pm
I suppose I'll get my older poems out of the way now ... Well ... This one was my first, XD:
Missing You
As I watch the sakura blossoms fall,
I cannot help but think of it all.
The evening breeze is slight,
As if it knows my plight.
Staring at the moon,
I think of you.
Of one so true,
With eyes so blue,
Now I'm missing you.
Missing You
As I watch the sakura blossoms fall,
I cannot help but think of it all.
The evening breeze is slight,
As if it knows my plight.
Staring at the moon,
I think of you.
Of one so true,
With eyes so blue,
Now I'm missing you.
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Re: Poetry & Songs
by Selene Hime 3/1/2010, 11:23 pm
shadowsowner888 wrote:Aww, that's beautiful, Selene! ^^
Again, thank you. ^_^
Believe it or not, that poem is over two years old. XD.
Miafire wrote:Shockingly.. amazing. O,o
*Blushes* Thanks, XD. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I actually didn't think it was that great upon rereading, but its good that I was apparently wrong.
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Re: Poetry & Songs
by Selene Hime 3/2/2010, 6:13 pm
Again, this is an older poem (my second):
How can I?
Standing in the rain I sigh,
And ask why?
Why am I afraid of my affection,
Do I fear rejection?
As the days go by,
My confidence remains nigh.
Your departure draws near,
Yet I'm bound by fear.
My heart says yes,
But I can only guess.
How can I speak,
For who do you seek?
Standing in the rain I sigh,
And ask why?
Why am I afraid of my affection,
Do I fear rejection?
As the days go by,
My confidence remains nigh.
Your departure draws near,
Yet I'm bound by fear.
My heart says yes,
But I can only guess.
How can I speak,
For who do you seek?
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Re: Poetry & Songs
by shadowsowner888 3/2/2010, 7:42 pm
Just as awesome as Missing You. :3 Amazing job, Selene.
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Re: Poetry & Songs
by Selene Hime 3/2/2010, 8:50 pm
shadowsowner888 wrote:Just as awesome as Missing You. :3 Amazing job, Selene.
*Huggles* Thanks, Shadow. ^_^
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Re: Poetry & Songs
by Selene Hime 3/3/2010, 10:08 pm
A bit more recent than the last two, but still from late 2008 (although I do like this one more 
):
):Soaring
Staring up at the sky,
I watch the doves fly.
A calming sight,
Framed by evening light.
One lands near,
Beckoning for me to banish fear.
A ray of hope appears,
For me to tell the one I hold dear.
Warmth washes over me,
Like a flaming sea.
The dove coos it's song,
Lifting into flight to where it belongs.
A white dove,
Soaring on the wings of love.
Staring up at the sky,
I watch the doves fly.
A calming sight,
Framed by evening light.
One lands near,
Beckoning for me to banish fear.
A ray of hope appears,
For me to tell the one I hold dear.
Warmth washes over me,
Like a flaming sea.
The dove coos it's song,
Lifting into flight to where it belongs.
A white dove,
Soaring on the wings of love.
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Re: Poetry & Songs
by shadowsowner888 3/4/2010, 11:53 am
That's sweet! ^^ I think I kinda like the first two better, cus doves are all peacey, and I'm like "WHOOO LETS HAVE FUN!" But it's very good all the same.
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Re: Poetry & Songs
by Selene Hime 3/4/2010, 1:21 pm
shadowsowner888 wrote:That's sweet! ^^ I think I kinda like the first two better, cus doves are all peacey, and I'm like "WHOOO LETS HAVE FUN!" But it's very good all the same.
Lolz, okay. I'm still glad that you enjoyed Soaring, though. ^_^
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Re: Poetry & Songs
by Selene Hime 3/4/2010, 7:24 pm
Ave wrote:Missing You is amazing, Selena.
Thanks, XD. I guess you meant Soaring? *Huggles anyway* I'm still glad you enjoyed it, though.
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Re: Poetry & Songs
by Selene Hime 3/5/2010, 7:45 pm
My first attempt at Haiku, XD. Based off of the Kistune myth, and the minor myths connected to it. Also inspired by Buson's single haiku:
"Was that a fox"
"or a prince in disguise"
"this hazy spring evening?"
I'm not sure if standard grammar for regular poetry applies to haiku, so I used Basho's and Buson's general grammar, XD.
Kitsune Moon - Haiku Quartet
Moonlight graces a
gently lapping sakura
blossom cast pond.
Lady of change,
loyalty and deception.
Myth surrounds thee.
Nine graceful tails,
eyes of amber light,
gleam this spring night.
Love, fox or princess?
Winding trails of fate,
mists of the moon.
"Was that a fox"
"or a prince in disguise"
"this hazy spring evening?"
I'm not sure if standard grammar for regular poetry applies to haiku, so I used Basho's and Buson's general grammar, XD.
Kitsune Moon - Haiku Quartet
Moonlight graces a
gently lapping sakura
blossom cast pond.
Lady of change,
loyalty and deception.
Myth surrounds thee.
Nine graceful tails,
eyes of amber light,
gleam this spring night.
Love, fox or princess?
Winding trails of fate,
mists of the moon.
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