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Post by Crystal Aura 4/2/2010, 5:43 pm

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Love the light because it shows you the way, yet endure the darkness... Because it shows you the stars.

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In this world, there is always danger for those who are afraid of it...

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The tears in your eyes daze your sight, the agony in them are mirroring the hazy moonlight buried deep within your flawed soul. You want to run away to felicity, you want to run away from all of the dread inside of you. The little panics that cause a gunfire warfare right in your head. The little terrors that make your heart hammer. The little worries that come back over and over, and stinging your mind like a horde of mosquitoes.
The frights, being needles pricking your skin...
But what if there was a surpassing, preferable place to just skedaddle to without a backward glance? It’s what you have always wished for, anyway.

This is possibly what you thought, while one day evacuating that little village, and your adequate, yet totally insufficient, wee house near a prairie. Fit for a munchkin, you always thought of it. Not fit for you, at all. But then again, what was fit for you in this whole village? In this whole world? In this whole universe? You, probably, think that even if you would have lived for eons and eons, nothing would have ever changed for you. Well, that was probably how you felt about your existence as you hoped onto a plane and flew away to a rich, vast and lavish house called Fellsmoor Manor. You were hired there as a confidant, a helper, and an intern, along with a few others. The owner once started a home-based business in which she got paid for simply enjoying the companionship of pets. A pet is often the children of the family in many houses, as Americans spend more than $34 billion a year pampering their pets. So, the business boomed as it would. And now, with an internship, and getting payed... what could go wrong? Even if the owner is said to be a witch, as as by practicing witchcraft and voodoo, just because the animals she pet-sat were completely changed for the greater good. In an unsual way. But you don’t care... You don’t care about that or anything else everyone was coming up with.
You were set on going to this ‘haunted mansion’ if your smutty life depended on it. You were determined to make it better by doing this, anyway.
But at what cost...?


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- Spell correctly.
- No hefty swearing. Although, crap as well as just doing (*beep*) is allowed.
- No god-moding.
- You are frobidden of power play.
- Romance, well of course. Marriage? You bet. Detailed, ghastly birth scenes?
Well, that’s just a marvelous way to create a social blunder, as well as nausea.

- You must seek permission from the user before reducing his/hers charrie to ashes with the boogeyman, or something outrageous like that. xD
- HAVE FUN!

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Name:
Gender:
Age:
Mythological in any way?:
Personality:
Appearance:
Weakness[es]:
Other:


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Current members (exculding myself):
1. Komoda
2. Dark Fairytales
3. Cyn431

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My form

Name: Irène McClinsey
Gender: Female
Age: 48
Mythological in any way?: She is a dead witch.
Personality: She’s fussy and crabby, but can also be considerate and is usually polite. She knows her Victorian mansion like the back of her hand, and tries to please everyone she meets. Knowing her mansion that well, she still merely spends her time, and loves spending it most, in the kitchen. She has two colossal kitchens in her manor; one for cooking her own meals and one for stirring and creating her own spells.
Appearance: She has waist-long cherry red hair, high cheekbones, and pastel skin. Her eyes are large and amber, and always half-lidded. Her nails are often painted scarlet, and are just red, perfect ovals. She likes to wear white gold, snow flake dangle earrings constantly. And she always wears black.
Weakness[es]: She’s frail, so many things and normal people could hurt her, of course. That is, before she hurts them. If they’re normal people, at all...
Other: Her real, not physical, age is 107. And yes, she does own an enchanted broomstick and a bewitched spellbook. Muhawhaw!


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Name: Breanne (Bree) Rose.
Gender: Female.
Age: 19.
Mythological in any way?: Nope.
Personality: She's mousy, self-effacingly modest and shy. Therefore, she is reticent about her achievements, furthermore about her personal life. And she's easily set on edge. Nonetheless, she is innocent and tight-lipped. More TBPO.
Appearance: She has copper blonde hair, and at frequent intervals of time it's pulled back into a loose ponytail. She has sapphire blue eyes and pasty skin. She's slender, but not too muscular. And above all else, she's just plain and run-of-the-mill looking, in her own honest opinion. Her face also occasionally has a rosy tint to it.
Weakness[es]: Her very own modesty and lack of confidence.
Other: Nope, not in the least.

Name: Jagger Wendell
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Mythological in any way?: He laments his one and only condition, frequently; He is a sorcerer being stalked by a self-appointed Guardian Angel. He can make incorporeal attacks, and countless more things. (Like summoning the dead as a necromancer would, telepathy, The Sixth Sense, The Evil Eye, voodoo, he also works with pentagrams, and keeps his occultism and sortilege a big secret)
Personality: He is genuinely sociable and well-disposed, but loud-mouthed, although guarded, and is rarely reticent. And though he is indisputably laid-back and patient, he is keen and mentally alert—some would say ‘overly cautious, mentally alerted like heck’
Appearance: He has a immaculate and angular face—with high cheekbones, strong jaw line, a straight nose, and full lips. He has little width in proportion to height or length, so is tall and thin. He may be delicate in build; gracefully slim, but he isn’t too lanky, and therefore is considering working out. He has magnetic Caribbean aqua eyes, and pasty-pale skin. Sometimes, his face looks absolutely bloodless—if in crucial fear, for example—but otherwise, and most of the time, it’s a soft peach. He has copper blonde hair, cut short with the bangs cut straight across so that they barely touch the forehead, a little messy, and definitely shiny—a Caesar haircut that complements his patrician, formal grown-up features
Weakness[es]: His stalker Guardian Angel sometimes outs him on some things—makes him choose the wrong actions, words, ect... So, not necessarily the best things, against his will, or not
Other: Nope. The rest is TBPO

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Komoda2000:

Name: Rocus Van Alton
Gender: Male
Age: 24
Mythological in any way?: No.
Personality: He's moody and doesn't often express what he's actually feeling. He'll sometimes act tough and cold to cover up the fact that he's really emotionally weak. He has a dry sense of humor that's hard to catch on to but can be funny if you understand it. Rocus often acts on impulse and gets himself into trouble. He likes to pretend that he has complete control over what he's feeling, but those impulses are a result of his extreme emotions. Externally he's a glacier, but he has a typhoon going on inside of him. He's also quite controlling, although not entirely difficult to get along with.
Appearance: He has lightly tanned skin with a slight sickly tone. His dark chocolate hair falls loosely to the base of his neck in razor-straight strands. Lined with smoky eyeliner, his eyes are a deep and sullen shade of mocha, often spacing out as if he's looking right through you. Rocus often wears a Pentagram ring on his middle finger, along with a lot of leather studded collars and wrist bands. He usually wears all black but bits of silver and red aren't uncommon for him, either. His arms are covered with scarring from needles and he has a tattoo of an angel on his upper left shoulder.
Weakness[es]: He has an addictive personality. Drugs, alcohol, blood... You name it. He also won't take no for an answer.
Other: He's not a vampire, but he's a part of a cult that kills animals and humans for their blood. They're completely human, though.


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Dark Fairytales:

Name: Selia Kilendree
Gender: Female
Age: 18
Mythological in any way?: Werewolf
Personality: She is pretty much evil in a way. She doesn't like anyone, but is good at getting what she wants and walks with her head up as if she is better than anyone she meets.
Appearance: She has long, straight brown hair that perfectly reaches her waist. She trims it every day to keep its perfect length, and always has her long bangs braided back away from her face. He hair is always well cared for and shiny, and she has a very tall and slim figure. Her large brown eyes match her hair and her full lips and acne-free face is always covered with makeup to match what she wears, which always happens to be beautiful and expensive gowns.
Weakness[es]: She absolutely HATES cats. They disgust her to bits, considering she is a dog.

Other: Every night at midnight she turns into a very large wolf with the same brown colored fur and eyes. Her fur is pretty much medium length and she changes back at one o'clock. Although on full-moon nights, she is not seen throughout the day because the night before, she does not change back into a human. She stays a wolf until the full moon night where she changes back at dawn.



Name: Cilie Kel
Gender: Female
Age: 19
Mythological in any way?: No
Personality: Cilie isn't very nice, but she isn't evil either. She sees someone who she likes, and ends up acting like a puppy, following the person around and taking orders or assisting them in any way possible. She does not, however, like to be ordered around by people she doesn't like.
Appearance: Cilie has light brown hair that reaches her shoulder braids, but is always thrown into a messy ponytail with a strand of hair always in her face. She has small eyes that are a crystal blue color and is short and skinny
Weakness[es]: She isn't a good fighter, and can get beaten easily.
Other: None

Name: Anidori-Kilandra Talianna Isilee ((Isi))
Gender: Girl !!
Age: 20
Mythological in any way?: Kind of...Sort of... In a way o.0
Personality: Isi is a very odd person. She often stares into space, and when she does this it is as if she is deaf to every sound in the world. She talks to herself all the time, and will often twitch. She can be described as "Mentally Challenged." But it is far worse than that. When she talks to people, she never looks at them. Often away, or somewhat near them. If you touch her, even the most gently she will scream and start trying to hit you. Like I said, "Mentally Challenged" in a way.
Appearance: Long black hair that reaches her waist and, literally, black eyes. Her pupils often fill the whole of her eye, so no white is visible. She is long and skinny and often wears gothic clothing.
Weakness[es]: Speaking about her past
History: She was in a mental institution for five years before breaking out and running to the mansion as an intern.
Other: She will often be taken over by a dark spirit and you never know what she will do when that happens. Whenever she is taken over, her pupils will fill her eyes so that no white is visible. When she isn't taken over, her pupil is the size of the tip of a needle and only white is visible.

Name: Beka Cooper
Gender: Girl !!
Age: 18
Mythological in any way?: Nope
Personality: She spends her time singing or practicing her Tae Kwon Do mainly, and doesn't talk to people much. But it isn't because she is shy, because trust me she's not shy. She just prefers to be alone.
Appearance: Brown straight hair that reaches the end of her shoulder blades and she is short for her age. She obviously has some muscle, but she isn't as crazed as a body builder or anything.
Weakness[es]: When others tell her what to do
Other: She hated her parents, and they hated her. Of seven kids in all, she came unexpectedly and they didn't want her. To deal with them, she would be out of the house doing what she loved all day. Singing and fighting. She is a 2nd degree blackbelt at Tae Kwon Do, specialist in weapons and she loved to sing. Once her parents decided she was a good singer, they forbid her to sing any longer. But they didn't know about Tae Kwon Do. On her 18 birthday they found her room empty and she was gone to become an intern.

Name: Erin Blacksworth
Gender: Girl
Age: 20
Mythological in any way?: Nope
Personality: Erin is quite nice, yet she flirts a lot. She used to be a cheerleader and very popular in high school which somewhat explains that factor. The only reason why she flirts a lot with guys is because her father abandoned her when she was young, and she believes if she gets on the guy's good side they can't do the same to her again.
Appearance: Very straight blond hair that reaches her shoulders and a tall body structure that is skinny and has the perfect curves. She is obviously very pretty.
Weakness[es]: When people point out her insecurities
Other: None


Name: Carson Galloway
Gender: Guy
Age: 17
Mythological in any way?: No
Personality: He is a nice, polite guy. Once you get to know him and gain his trust, that is. He is one of those types who hates you before he likes you, and you have to prove yourself to him in order to get on his good side. You dis his family, you dis him. One easy mistake and he will hate you forever. I'm not kidding, he can hold on heck of a grudge.
Appearance: He has shaggy brown hair that is always in his green eyes, and a muscular build. He has been asked multiple times to be a model because of his extremely nice body. He has a perfect tan that isn't too dark and always wears tight-ish shirts and long shorts.
Weakness[es]: Don't get on his bad side ! Trust me!
Other: Nothing =] -- Charrie for use with Cyn


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Cyn431:

Name: Emily Marren
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Mythological in any way?: Contrary to past beliefs, no.
Personality: Emily is an incredibly silent girl, to the point where people think she's mute. Most people don't get the chance to make these conclusions, though, as she seldom collides with society. She had a feeling this place would be a splendid refuge for her to live peacefully and silently within, maybe overcome those traumatic times that kept her trap shut for twelve years. That last part seemed like a hopeless wish, but that's only because she wasn't expecting company. Emily's a girl who likes to dwell in the past when things were pure, lively, childish, just to get away from the rest of her miserable life. Sometimes her depressing yearning creates thoughts of suicide, but thankfully it only leads to tremendous studies that may help her if she goes somewhere in life. Where would that be? Well, Emily happens to be a girl very smart when it comes to conspiracy theories, and has lots of research and evidence about several things. She just refuses to share them with anybody until the time is right. So that's another thing, Emily is very secretive, and is good at keeping secrets considering her silence. Emily can speak, though. You just have to threaten and scare her out of her skin and more, and then she'll talk. The only problem is that's exceptionally difficult because she's seen more than anyone can imagine.
Appearance: Uh... This 'un, with paler skin and dark green eyes, and is often wearing MUCH different clothes and probably isn't smiling so truly. (I couldn't find the picture I wanted. T.T)

Spoiler:
Weakness[es]: Physical contact from humans isn't her best friend, nor is her allergy of strawberries or memories of family.
Other: Trust me, there's a lot more to Emily than this form can tell.





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Post by Crystal Aura 4/3/2010, 11:03 am

({ Accepting all forms! You could PM them to me on a whim or just post them directly to the thread! Very Happy })
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Post by Crystal Aura 4/4/2010, 3:52 pm

({ Anyone willing, at all? =/ })
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Post by Komoda 4/5/2010, 3:06 pm

(I need to formulate a template, but this will do for now. I'm not sure how to start this, but is it alright if he just kind of sits outside the mansion?)


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After having knocked on the door three times, I sat on the edge of the stairs with my hands wrapped around my knees. The cool breeze lightly brushed against my arms, creating small goosebumps that I simply ignored. Pain and cold was but a feeling, and feelings could be pushed away if you convinced yourself they didn't exist. Such a discipline was essential when you always had that blood lust pressing on your mind, begging you to rip apart every living being in sight. I bit down my tongue as soon as the images of warm, rich blood flooded into my mind. I sincerely hoped I could control myself around my host.

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Post by Crystal Aura 4/5/2010, 3:25 pm

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She was sitting on a sofa, and a maid instantly came into the room and cleared her throat. Her attention got pulled up from her cat Nightmare purring in her arms. The maid’s lips parted into a smile. “Uh, Amarantha told me that she saw someone sitting outside from the second floor – And it may be one of those interns you’ve been expecting...” Irène scrutinized her maid and let a moment’s silence fill the room. “Okay, then.” She responded in a dull monotone. “Go let whoever’s there inside.”
She nodded wisely. “Yes, of course,” And with that, the maid exited the room without a backward glance. Nightmare cranned her neck to see Irène's face. “And you,” She said in a shuddering voice, her gaze meeting the cat’s. She paused for a beat as she bored into it’s eyes. “Be nice to the stranger.”

({ And sorry it took so long, I got distracted by my mother. })

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Post by Komoda 4/5/2010, 3:36 pm

(It's fine, I had to finish up some stuff anyway. Although, I can only stay for 15 minutes before I have to brush my dog. Sowwy. Sad)

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I rose from my knees, faintly hearing voices from the other side of the door. I knocked on the door once more in a slow pace, attempting to cover up my impatience. I had to seem polite, after all. If I was to make a good impression, I had to make up for my shady looks with charm. The only problem was, I was a little lacking in charisma. I brushed off any stray pieces of dust or dirt from the black material of my shirt as I waited in front of the door in a rigid position.

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The maid opened the door to the man. “Hello,” she greeted half-heartedly. But her voice was still thick with joyfulness. “I’ll go with the assumption that you’re one of the awaited interns, eh?”

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Post by Crystal Aura 4/5/2010, 3:44 pm

({ That's absolutely fine, I'll make it quick and I'll want to create another form for myself. nod })
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Post by Komoda 4/5/2010, 3:45 pm

(Alright! Well I'll be back in about 15 minutes. :3)

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"Yes, I am," I replied. I courteously nodded to her before stepping inside, not sure if it would be appropriate to shake her hand. "My name is Rocus Van Alton. It's a pleasure to meet you."
Thank God for high school etiquette courses... I thought.

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She stationed her car at the verge of the dirt path, the foreground to the manor. She turned off the engine and took out the keys from the ignition. She unbuckled herself and stepped out, feeling a faint breeze. She shoved her keys down her pocket and slammed the door. After unloading the trunk of her luggage, she strode towards the laughably massive mansion in the forest with a bounce in her step.
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“Why, it’s a tremendous pleasure, sir,” She bobbed her head weakly, and gestured him forwards. “Well, let’s go meet the owner of this huge, gargantuan house, now.” She forced a laughed and backed away, eventually rotating on her heel and walking towards the room she last saw her master.

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Post by Komoda 4/5/2010, 4:49 pm

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I nodded silently, uneased by her laugh. As I followed slowly behind her, I wearily studied my surroundings. "Gargantuan" really was no exaggeration at all; the place was absolutely tremendous! I vaguely wondered how much money the host must have to afford such an incredible home.

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Post by Crystal Aura 4/5/2010, 5:02 pm

({ Sowwy, again. >.<
Got distracted. Likely won't happen, again. I hate coding so much. })


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She arrived at the doorsteps and tried to swallow the lump rising in her throat as she knocked in much haste. Her knees trembled.

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She turned the door's knob and unclasped the door. “Ma’am,” she saluted in a delicate voice. She then flicked Rocus a glance. Irène lifted her chin and shared her maid’s gaze on Rocus. She nudged her cat aside and picked herself up from the sofa. “Why, hello, there.”
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Post by Komoda 4/5/2010, 5:11 pm

(It's alright! I have stuff to do too, so..XD)

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I was momentarily distracted by a rapid knocking in the distance. Although I wondered who it is, I reminded myself that the focus here was to make a good impression. But being around these people... I could practically see the blood rushing through their veins, I could imagine myself tearing away the flesh and slurping down the buttery scarlet. I knew it was stupid to go without blood for so long. Sometimes heroine could substitute for the cravings, but it just wasn't good enough; it made me so weak...

I buckled slightly as I snapped out of my trance. With a forced smile, I covered up my weakness by changing it into a deep bow. "Hello. You must be Madam McClinsey?"


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Post by Crystal Aura 4/5/2010, 5:12 pm

({ GTG eat supper. I'll just devour it like a pig and come back within two shakes of a lamb's tail, 'kay? *a lamb shakes it's tail two times before my heart could take it's next beat*
-_- Well, that's just not fair. })
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Post by Komoda 4/5/2010, 5:13 pm

(Haha, okay! I need to comb my hair and make my bed anyway (at 3:00 in the afternoon I still haven't done that) so I'm glad you've given me time! ^^)
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Post by Crystal Aura 4/5/2010, 5:19 pm

({ Back. The reply's work in progress. ^^ })
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Anxiety rolled off of her like waves, making her quake and shudder in harmony. Clenching her teeth together, she gazed over her shoulder to her coal-black 1987 Chevrolet. A smile tugged at the corner of her lips and a chuckle sniffed out of her nose, because in the back of her mind, she imagined the owner’s limousine next to it; it’d look like a broken tricycle, in comparison. Her stare flickered back to the door, and she knocked briskly, again.

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She moved her head in a nod. “Last time I checked,” she affirmed. “And you must be...?” she trailed off, veering her head to the side. “Oh,” the servant gasped as the realization of someone else at the door hit. “There must be someone else here in attendance!”
Irène shrugged. “Well, I was surely expecting more than one person.” She scorned humourlessly. Her glare as black as thunder. The planes of her face hardening in the servant’s direction. The servant frowned and paced out of the room and over to the door, again.

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Post by Komoda 4/5/2010, 5:57 pm

(Sorry! I had to brush my dog and play with the cats. XD)

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I interpreted the woman's body language as mild hostility, so I loosened up a slight bit. There was no need to be quite as polite if she had a similar nature to mine. Of course, I couldn't make any assumptions. It was mild misinterpretations like such that could get me killed.

Ignoring the knocks at the door, I completed the sentence for her. "Rocus Van Alton," I stated, keeping my gaze going straight into her amber eyes. One falter and I could appear to be cowardly and shy, which quite frankly wasn't an option for me.


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(I hope you don't misinterpret what I said as powerplaying. XD I was simply writing about what his impressions was of her, not trying to alter your character's actual personality.)


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Post by Crystal Aura 4/5/2010, 5:59 pm

({ S'okay, the Internet easily occupies me, anyhoo. xD })
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Post by Komoda 4/5/2010, 6:19 pm

(Ah, well I'll await your reply as I make a better template for him.)
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Post by Crystal Aura 4/5/2010, 6:33 pm

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She cursed under her breath and sat on one of the doorsteps. She rested her leg on top of the other and impatiently bobbed her foot.

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“Pleased to meet you,” Irène murmured. “Let me show you the guest rooms. Freely take any one you’d like, since none of the others showed up, yet...” Her eyebrows pulled down in confusion as her cat hissed. She didn’t look away from the man’s face. “Nevermind the cat, Nightmare. She’s a bit maladjusted with strangers.”

The servant threw the front door wide. “Hello, miss?”

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She unfolded her legs and crossed her ankles, instead. She craned her neck and turned her gaze to see a girl standing there, gripping the doorframe, her fingers curled into a tight fist around the doorknob. “Huh, hi!” she spluttered, rising to her feet and twisting her torso into the maid’s direction. “I’m Breanne Rose, but call me Bree. I’m a student at Cambridge College, in Memphis.”

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She raised her eyesbrows. “Well, that’s very far away.” She then smiled broadly. “Where have I heard of that college, before?”


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“Well, it’s the second best out of all the colleges and universities in the world.”


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“Oh? Really? I thought Yale was pretty good. I went there,”


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She mimicked the maid’s smile. “That’s the third best, madam.”


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Post by Crystal Aura 4/5/2010, 6:43 pm

({ I'm so ashamed of myself. Sorry, I had major problems coding and now something's wrong with my laptop. God, I hate myself. I need to go take a show, bye. BBS. })
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Post by Komoda 4/5/2010, 6:44 pm

(Aw, it's perfectly fine, Crystal! It gave me just enough time to finish his template. :3)

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And so this addiction was all I had, the only thing to halt my fall…


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I snorted. I wasn't exactly an animal person so it wouldn't surprise me at all if the cat didn't like me, whether I was a stranger or not; animals just seemed to sense the danger of my addictions.

I was eager to see the guest rooms. I wanted to know a variety of things about where I would be staying. A private fridge would be essential and a window as well, along with of course my basic living needs. I'd need to keep all of these things in mind before I made my choice.

"Would it be alright if I had a room on one of the lower floors?" I requested, before quickly adding, "But not the basement. If it would save you time, perhaps we could tour just the main floor?"


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Post by Crystal Aura 4/5/2010, 7:16 pm

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“I don’t see why not,” she droned, her head bowing and her shoulders slumping. She began to trudge towards Rocus, before she tripped, and she had no clue what caught her foot until she heard a ‘meow’ when she saved herself from faceplanting into the floor right there in front of her first intern. “Nightmare!” she snarled. “What’s wrong with you?!”
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She revolved herself completely and inched towards the door. “So...?”
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“Come in, come in!” she chanted. “And follow me!” She headed for Irène in the elegant salon.
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“A-Alrighty, then...” She pursed her lips, closed the front door, and followed the maid into a room.


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Post by Komoda 4/5/2010, 7:32 pm

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And so this addiction was all I had, the only thing to halt my fall…


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I eyed the cat suspiciously as I silently waited for Irène to lead me to the guest rooms. I wondered what other interns would be joining me in this mansion. Part of me wanted a select few so that I could control my urges, but if there were more... Then that would be just more for me to kill. More for me to feed on, more blood for me to indulge in. The mere thought of it made my mouth water in anticipation.

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