Just One Night [THE FINAL CHAPTER-20-IS UP!]

Thanks. And there was more to the letter(You're supposed to be a little confused at that point); no one even knows why she's dead yet xP

Awww . . . D: Such a sad chapter.

(I'm confused! Woot! But I don't think she's really dead, either. ^^)

I know this probably not appropriate but... I so hate you. -.- You tell me to ready your new chapter like everyday but i need to not listen to u because it makes my writing sound like a pile of manure. lol. Then again no one can be good at everything.

Tigger, if you know you shouldn't say something, why say it? Please, in the future, try and put things in a kinder way. You don't need to tell someone you hate them to get your point across.

Wow! O.O I am so confused right now. First, Cadie calls her secret boyfriend, leaves, then during the wedding, a letter comes saying she's dead? I didn't expect all of that, honestly.

I respect your rule Shadow, but we use 'ihateyou' as a kind of 'your so lucky' or 'im jealous' kinda way. like, we don't actually hate eachother. xP I understand if she should reword that, though ^^.

And thanks Melon & Alexis (:

I have to agree with Lindsay, I won't miss her long either! But why is she dead? We must investigate! LOL! I love this book Ems!

Keep writing this. I caught up on all of the chapters and it's really great. (Should I be disappointed in myself that I'm super-happy that Cadie is dead? xD)

(No Ari because I am too XD)

<3--[Emily]--<< wrote:I respect your rule Shadow, but we use 'ihateyou' as a kind of 'your so lucky' or 'im jealous' kinda way. like, we don't actually hate eachother. xP I understand if she should reword that, though ^^.

And thanks Melon & Alexis (:

Oh, okay! XD Thanks for pointing that out, then. (See, this is why all you close friend people confuse me. xD I can never tell when you really mean it when you act mad!) Sorry bout that, my bad.

It's fine! I just wanted to kind of sort it out. And thanks Arianna that means a lot! & I agree with Catbuster

I'm not supposed to be on the computer during the weekdays, but I may be able to get on tomorrow and right the next chapter. Hopefully things will get happier. You'll have to keep reading to see... (:

[Chapter 12 is up (:]

[Sorry that it gets a little boring]

Jason! You better tell Dave the truth because Cadie deserves a good "Talking to"! LOL!

Please write more! Please! Please! I'll pay you a million bucks!

That was really good I liked it a lot, and I KNEW she wasn't dead!

Cadie is a total brat! D: I wanna eat her! Please?

Haha ^^ Actually I really was originally planning on her drowning. But then I was like "I'm too lazy to type out the depressing chapters" because I hate writing my charries when they're depressed... So I made it better! And thanks Ells hahaha I'm writing Chapter 13 now. Oh & Be my guest, Shadow xD

*glomps on Cadie*

Hurray! xD

Chapter 13 is up ~ Jason & Lindsay Falling in Love<3

Awww, that was sweet I liked it ^_^, although I have noticed that sometimes the names of the people randomly change..Like in this chapter Jason became an Aaron...

Thanks! I'm kinda trying to make their relationship get stronger at a low level... If that makes any sense (:

And sorry about that, I'll edit it out later. I was trying to work on Protection & Just One Night's chapters at the same time. Bad idea.

Aww, that was incredibly sweet. ^^ I can't wait to read more! You must keep writing.

I love this story too much....xD I just might esplode. LOL. It got really interesting when Caddie was in the Jeep.

Thanks guys! I'll more than likely write chapter 14 when Monique's over later today(she just doesn't know that she's coming over xD). I'm trying to determine where to cut the story off, but I think it's still too short. I have the PERFECT ending for it, though (:

Cool! WAIT! YOU MEAN YOUR ENDING YOUR STORY SOON?!?! If you do, I told you, I'll esplode! xD

All i have to say to Lindsay is.. "YOu GO GIRL!" That was 2 cute! Thats what im talking about. Im pretty much a hopeless romance so that was right up my alley. ~claps~ beautiful can't wait till the next chapter!