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I'm sorry I was king,

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Post by Novastare 5/18/2010, 12:56 pm

(( This is now prince john's point of view. I had to have his side *Shrugs* lol. M&F hanging, death, and just beside the fact that this isn't or wasn't proven real ))


You were never a follower, you choose your own way,
You were the greatest leader, much to my dismay.
I was always second, I guess that why I'm here,
I see my dreams, they always seem so near.
But mother loved you best, yes she gave you all,
And when my foot did stumble, she would let me fall.
I showed much of promise, but nobody cared to see,
Now they'll regret that, because their king is me.
I thought to make them see, to see what they had done,
But now it's only me, just waiting to be hung.
I blame you, my brother, you were always best,
Even when I helped you, with every little test.
Now I see what I became, but thats just too late,
I was always dark, and this was my sad fate.
So now I hope your happy, I'm going now to die,
We both caused this brother, so now it's time to cry.
Pull the rope around my neck, I knew this day would come,
And so at last it's time to leave, this rotton town behind,
And so they'll laugh and be merry, because I was never kind.
And now I see the last sight, your the finale thing,
So I'll leave you brother, I'm sorry I was king.
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Post by Hahaha818 5/18/2010, 7:12 pm

Great job, Nova!
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Post by Novastare 5/18/2010, 7:15 pm

Thanks!! Razz
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Post by Puckspaw 5/18/2010, 7:17 pm

Awesome poem, Nova! =D
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Post by Novastare 5/18/2010, 7:22 pm

Thank you!
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Post by shadowsowner888 5/19/2010, 7:16 pm

This actually makes me feel bad for poor Prince John. ._. You gave a very real and emotional perspective of him! I like it.
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Post by Novastare 5/19/2010, 7:34 pm

Thank you Shadow! I might make a poem for Robin soon, or some of the others. I'm very inspired by that movie. Very Happy
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