~ CHANGE. ~ FINISHED! ENDING POSTED! ~

The Newms wrote:I like the part where you talk about how the scene 'melted' into a flashback, that was a really good description! And the teacher freaking out part made me laugh xD

Haha, chapter 5 is one of my favorites! I like the flashback too. (:

Ooh, that was a really good chapter. I liked that melting description

Thanks cat!

Chapter 6 up!
I might put 7 on later its a really short meaningless chapter but kind of needs to be there for transititon.

Annddd chapter 7 up!

......I still like Lance x3 I'm completely ignoring the fact he is flirting with a VP.......
Heh heh, love the new chapters! Can't wait to read more!! ^.^

I think Chapter 8 is when it gets more interesting. If I remember correctly.
I have one minor detail that I can't decide on for the very ending.


I'm definately making a sequel to this, I think. (: I just have to expand on the teeny idea I had. Somehow.

Greatn story! i love it

Thanks!

Hmm....well, since I don't know what the endign you're debating on is, I can't help you decide. Just write whatever you think works best ^.^

And wooooot! A sequel to this shall be fun = D

The Newms wrote:Hmm....well, since I don't know what the endign you're debating on is, I can't help you decide. Just write whatever you think works best ^.^

And wooooot! A sequel to this shall be fun = D

I would tell you but it would ruin the story! xD But I made a decision.

Yess And it will be in the summer, after this school year that this story takes place in.

love the new chapter More please!

Thanks Mandy! I have more written but I only post a chapter a day

Oooh, time for some PAYBACK!!!! Break up with Peter for Victoria, and then dump the phone in the toilet YESSSS!!!

Hahaha, not exactly cat (:
They aren't that mean.

I would totally do that, but... xD
They come up with something *much* better in the end, trust me

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA oh Victoria, leaving your phone silly places.
Jack and Janyce will now proceed to own your life.
xD

That was really good, I like the begining. 'Twas very dramatic.

The Newms wrote:HAHAHAHAHAHAHA oh Victoria, leaving your phone silly places.
Jack and Janyce will now proceed to own your life.
xD

That was really good, I like the begining. 'Twas very dramatic.

Hahaha

Thankyou, I really appreciate it! I thought it sounded like I was trying to make an emotional slash dramatic scene and I failed. xD

GraceMarie8 wrote:Hahaha, not exactly cat (:
They aren't that mean.

I would totally do that, but... xD
They come up with something *much* better in the end, trust me

I cant't wait to see what they come up with!

Nah, you didn't fail, I really enjoyed it. I like the way you just started out with a piece of dialogue; I do that sometimes, too. It kinda draws the reader in, I think.

The Newms wrote:Nah, you didn't fail, I really enjoyed it. I like the way you just started out with a piece of dialogue; I do that sometimes, too. It kinda draws the reader in, I think.

Thanks, I appreciate it.
I think so too. I normally use dialouge to begin things when I write but I haven't done that in change very much

Everyone, Chapter 9 is on the 3rd post. I didn't know that there was a post size limit,

Don't worry, it's all good! xP I feel bad I snagged the second post, so you had to hop down a few posts to continue.

Anyhoozle, OHHHH SNAPPPP, Jack knows what's going on. =O This is getting pretty intense, and usually I don't read these kinds of stories. GOOD JOB!

Nah, it's cool xD

Thanks!
I had to write chapter 9 twice because the autosave feature decided not to work yesterday. xP

that little brat victoria... tisk tisk...

THAT WEREWOLF! VICTORIA!!1! *Seethes* dude that was an awesome chapter, cannot WAIT to see what happens next!