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Post by conich 7/7/2010, 3:14 pm




The tears fall down my face when nobody’s near
I want to scream and the world when everyone’s here
Losing you was like losing my heart
And I can’t wait for the time when were not apart

You went too early, you went too fast
I still don’t know how I’m going to last
This whole in my heart aches with sorrow
I’m not even hoping for tomorrow

But I’m going to live because I know what you’d say
‘Keep living you life; I’ll see you some day’


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Post by Puckspaw 7/7/2010, 3:56 pm

Aww, great job, Amanda!
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Post by conich 7/7/2010, 10:15 pm

Thanks! Smile
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Post by Rai 7/7/2010, 10:17 pm

This is really great. Very Happy
I look forward to more: I really liked this poem! Smile Keep writing!
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Post by Novastare 7/7/2010, 11:15 pm

Aww, it's wonderful Mandy!
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Post by imushu 7/8/2010, 12:56 am

I liked it! And it's really cute! I hope anyone hurting can read this and know to keep moving on applause

You said you were looking for name suggestions right? I thought maybe "Losing You" or "Keep on Living"

Either way, KEEP ON WRITING :3
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Post by kindro 7/8/2010, 1:31 am

This was really good! I liked it! Uhh, as for names, perhaps, "I'll See You Someday" or something along the lines of that. :3 Keep writing poetry.
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Post by conich 7/8/2010, 1:47 am

Thank you guys so much! I'm glad you like it! *starts crying* And thanks for all of the suggestions for names, i think I'm going to go with Keep on Living.
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