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Help Us! We're Stuck in a Bakehouse! -A Sweeney Todd Fanfic.

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Post by Miss_Alice 8/17/2009, 12:37 am

Help Us! We're Stuck in a BakeHouse!
A Fanfic by your truely, Miss_Alice.


Maturity: This contains non-graphic err... bloody scenes, and that's it. (If you seen Sweeney Todd, You know what I mean, It will not be as.. gross. xP)
Fantasy: ha! The Fanasy of this never really happened... Or did it? Shocked

WARNING! If you haven't seen Sweeney Todd; The Demon Barber of Fleet Street, It might be easier to get this story if you watch it. Or you can use your mind and guess what's happening. :3

On with the story!

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Chapter One:
Meet Gemma, Toby, Mrs. Lovette, and Sweeney Todd.

Gemma watched Toby itch at the wig he was wearing. She sighed silently. They both peeked out the tent to see the people gathering outside the tent. Gemma swiped at a piece of bun that had fallen out and tucked it behind her ear. Her chocolate brown hair was pulled loosely into a bun, to get ready for her and Toby's show. She looked over at him. He was tucking his wig hair into a tacky brown hat, and he nodded at her, getting the big drum. Gemma stood up, 4 feet 5 inches she stood in the tent. And that was pretty tall for a girl her age. Which was Ten. She looked over at Toby, again. They were the same height, and the same age. They also had the same hair color and the same dark brown eyes. Everyone back at the Workhouse called them Brother and Sister, but they weren't related at all. The Man in the Back of the tent snapped and they both began going out of the tent.
"Showtime." Gemma whispered.

Gemma and Toby looked at the crowd before them. Toby then began banging on the drum he brought out and set in down near the tent. He then ran back and stood next to Gemma. Skinny little Gemma.

"Ladies and Gentleman, May we have your attention please!" They both sang. This was Gemma's favorite part. Everyone became every quiet.

"Do you wake every morning in shame and despair, to discover your pillow is covered with hair,
or what not should be there?" Most of the men out in the crowd nodded.

"Well, ladies and gentlemen, From now on you can waken at ease! You need never again have a worry or care, I will show you a miracle, marvelous, rare." They kept singing.

"Gentleman, you are about to see something wot rose from the dead! On the top of my head!" Toby sang as he lifted his hat up to let the wig fall, while Gemma pointed to his head. The horrible looking blond wig that reached Toby's shoulders. Most of the men in the crowd laughed, while the woman gasped.

"T'was Pirelli's Miracle Elixir, That's what did the trick, sir, True, sir, true. Was it quick sir? Did it in a tick, sir, Just like an elixir Ought to do!" The two sang as they both brought out a bottle. Then they both squated by a man near the stage, and showed them a bottle.

"How about a bottle mister? Only costs a penny guaranteed." Gemma sang to the man before he took the bottle and gave her the penny. She smiled at the man and stuffed the penny in her bun.

They two kept singing, until the both spotted a couple in the crowd. The Man had something like a freaked out flat afro, that had a white strip through it. The Woman next to him had a back-combed side ponytail and wore a dress that Gemma had always wanted.

Then everything went downhill. For both Gemma and Toby.

End of Chapter One.

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Chapter Two:
Oh No....

Gemma and Toby stared at each other in horror as the two also stared singing.

"Pardon me ma'm what's that awful stench?" The Man said.
"Are we standing near an open drench?" The Woman sang back.
Pardon me sir what's that awful stench? Are we standing near an open drench?" They sang.

Gemma's jaw dropped. She looked over at Toby and they both nodded.

After about two more minutes of trying to sell the hair growth Elixir for Toby and Gemma, and making fun of the Elixir for the couple in the crowd. Gemma was grinding her teeth at the end. She looked over at Toby and her eyes widened. So did his, as they both heard The Man at the back of the Tent's voice.

"We're so dead..." Gemma whispered to Toby as their backs straighted and the separted from the opening of the tent.

End of Chapter Two.

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Mwahaha... Short Chapter for now. xD


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Post by shadowsowner888 8/17/2009, 9:02 am

I wonder what's gonna happen. xD Nice job so far!
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Post by Miss_Alice 8/18/2009, 6:29 pm

Thanks Shadow! :3

(The rather short) Chapter two has been added!
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Post by shadowsowner888 8/18/2009, 6:34 pm

That was interesting! xD Nice job.
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Post by The Mad Hatter 8/18/2009, 7:09 pm

OMG SWEENEY TODD!
xD
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