Dark poems

Here are some dark poems me and my dark souled self make up..
Maturity: Blood, death, hate, etc. etc.
Fantacy: Poems about books and tv shows probably.
End
They were playing in the parking lot
When they were told not to
Having so much fun
And she didn't see the big red truck
That was rumbling towards them
The man didn't stop
And she got hit,
With a snap and a crunch
End

Remember.. no red, please. Its for mods and admins.

Remember Capitalization. (:

Anyways... awesome. ^^

Oh sorry! Red is like, my fave font, so like, now im dead. x-x

Black
Blackness all around me
Enclosing me like a cage
Sight becomes useless
In dark like night

Devil
Her with her mean green eyes
Black hair like night
Pale ghost skin
And her name...
Autumn

Awesome. ^-^

Its alright. Your not in trouble. As long as you changed it, your fine. (:

Ps. Don't forget the Maturity and Fantasy ratings.

Thanks for adding the ratings. ^^

Your welcome. I think my favorite poem is Devil.

I like Black. Reminds me of Animal I Have Become by Three Days Grace, a little. :3

I was gonna make an original about that one.

I was just thinking of that one song as I read that poem. I dunno. I'm listening to Pain by TDG... that might be why.

Ah hah. You have a playlist?

In The "Music" section of this site, yes.

Awesomeness! I have some too, like, ten of em. Not here though, on a different website.

Ha. XD

Yeah...i should delete one of em, it has no songs on it!

ROFL. XD

Back on topic, now. (:

Awesome poems. That first one is kinda funny, but that's cus I always find simple deaths like that funny. xD

Uhh okay...thats nice...right?

I agree with Shadow. X3

Yah, it's nice, don't worry.

Thanks shad.

Aw... that's sad. Good, though.

Another dark poem here.
Cloudy
I stare at the clouds
blood dripping onto the pavement
heart beating slowly
Stop