Dark poems

Oooo. xD That's creepy! Nice job.

Rivers
Falling down
into the river
not trying to breath
but I do and then I die

Rain
Rain falls on the cement
Around the bloodied body
Why did you do it brother?
Why did you hurt me?
Why did you kill me?
I really want to know,
was it really your rage
or was it
that you knew
mother loved me more than you?
Or did you just
H A T E M E ?

Woah, creepy awesome! Good job! *shivers*

The Malicous One
Stalking at night
Eyes ablaze
teeth stained in blood
dark claws glinting
Warning,
Malice burning with every step

Lovely. XD

Ooh, very cool! More please!

Why thank you. Loving adoring fans.

Betrayed
You said you loved me
you betrayed me
you were really evil
But I believed you.

Now I lie here
bleeding my heart out
I never got the chance
to try again.

This is about a character in Ginga Densetsu Neko called Mary, who fell in love with the bad guy without knowing it and had his kids, and then when she found out he tried to kill her. Liz rescued her in time but she thought she was gonna die.

Aww, I feel awful for Mary But awesome wording!

Thanks.

You're welcome (:

The River
Here I am
drowning in a river
of my own sins
choking on the dirty water
Wait for me, my friends.

This one is also about Autumn, a GDN character. Many times she was almost killed. This was about when she got thrown in a river and Liz tried to help her, but she couldn't swim, and Autumn almost drowned herself by pushing her up and pushing herself down.

Eeeep, that's scary! (: Good one!

Thanks.