Re: ♥Danielle's Free Writing♥

by catbuster 12/23/2009, 2:33 pm

Woah, I really liked that one nice and detailed, but you may have taken a few more details into her actual actions like she slowly let the water take her... You know what I mean? It enchances the experince of the story. But overall it was very good albeit creepy if you actually understand what's going on.

by twilighter3000 12/23/2009, 6:08 pm

Well yeah, I didn't really get a chance to explain the backstory. It's a remake of my very first scene of my very first story, so... It was kinda like a whirlpool, so it wasn't really slow at all, lol!

by Crystal Aura 12/24/2009, 4:51 pm

Goregous! I'm attached to your amazing writing expertise, completely!
Did you know you're awesome...? Seriously...!
'Kay, you just inspired me. (See, I'm writing my own story and I only got the Prologue scratched of the list, but it's good so far, nod

)

by twilighter3000 12/24/2009, 8:48 pm

Thanks so much! Very Happy

OMG, I inspired someone! lol. Have you posted your prologue on here? Cuz I wanna read it! nod

*Edit* Ooh, I just read your prologe, and I love it! Can't wait to read more! Very Happy

by Doodles 12/27/2009, 2:07 am

Wow, I wish I were that good at writing! Seriously, though, I remember reading your writing from when you were little, it's improved so much! Not that it wasnt good before, but now it's no contest which one is better. Very Happy

by twilighter3000 12/29/2009, 12:59 pm

lol, thanks Shelby!

by twilighter3000 1/7/2010, 5:03 pm

OMG, so I think I'm overcoming my temporary writer's block! Cuz today in LA we had to write a paragraph/story on our favorite place, and mine was really good! [If I do say so myself, lol] I didn't bring it home cuz I finished it in class, but when I have to bring it home to edit it or whatever, I'll post it on this thread! Smile

by catbuster 1/7/2010, 5:25 pm

Awesome, I can't wait to see more of you're totally epic writing!!

by twilighter3000 1/7/2010, 8:35 pm

lol, thanks! Now that I'm hopefully starting to get over the evil writer's block, I'm hoping I'll have time to write! Even right now I'm getting off to study for the district spelling bee, and earlier I was doing HW, making dinner, and practicing guitar... *Sigh*

by twilighter3000 1/9/2010, 2:14 pm

My freewrite for today is up! [Kinda short, but oh well Razz

]

by catbuster 1/9/2010, 4:50 pm

Woah, that was really cool and slightly creepy and disturbing.... But besides that I really liked it I could almost see myself standing next to her watcing her wade into the water.

by twilighter3000 1/9/2010, 10:05 pm

lol, I know, I was just really missing the water, so I decided to freewrite about it, and it kinda turned creepy... lol. Thanks! Smile

by twilighter3000 1/16/2010, 7:34 pm

My writing from school is up in the "Everything Else" section under Danielle's Memoirs! Smile

by twilighter3000 2/7/2010, 5:58 pm

Another freewrite is up from a week or so ago that I forgot to post! Smile

Tell me what you think!

by twilighter3000 3/6/2010, 12:22 pm

New freewrite up! Sorry it's really short, I didn't get to finish it last night...

by **shadowsowner888** 3/6/2010, 12:32 pm

She's a daughter of Poseidon! Very Happy

by twilighter3000 3/6/2010, 1:26 pm

Hahaha, I wasn't even thinking about that when I was writing it! Weird... Lol

by twilighter3000 3/21/2010, 3:39 pm

New freewrite's up! Sorry it's been so long! Smile

by **shadowsowner888** 3/21/2010, 3:45 pm

Aww. I feel so bad for her. :/

by twilighter3000 3/21/2010, 3:52 pm

Yeah... I was like, "aww, poor her." [lol, I didn't even come up with a name for her.] rolleyes

by **shadowsowner888** 3/21/2010, 4:59 pm

xD Even poorer her.

by twilighter3000 3/24/2010, 8:53 pm

Hahaha. I know, right?

by twilighter3000 4/17/2010, 5:13 pm

I posted a freewrite I did last night! Hope you like. Smile

by **shadowsowner888** 4/18/2010, 8:34 am

*points* He's an emo! :O

Or she. xD Um. Well, that was an enjoyable freewrite! :3 Maybe that peace will help the person stop. xD

by twilighter3000 4/18/2010, 10:27 am

Haha, yes, I was thinking it's a she, but I guess I never really specified... Yeah, I wanted to do something that I couldn't really relate to, [I'm not emo, I promise] to test how imaginitive I could be! nod

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