Seth's Poem

(maturity: low, fantasy: none)


You're feeling lost, you're feeling down,
Your head underwater, about to drown,
Searching for something to pull you out,
For you don't have the strength to scream or shout

You look around, but never see,
The face looking down at thee,
The outstretched arm and reaching hand,
The one that belongs to a powerful man

About to draw your fleeting breath,
The hand swiftly grabs you from the chains of death,
Before you can thank him the man is gone,
Thanks to him death has lost and life has won

Dedicated to Seth L. I hope he never gives up, and knows that there is a man who will always pull him out of any situation, no matter how deep in trouble he may be! We love you Seth!!!!

That's a great poem, Pirox. :3 It describes how I feel sometimes, though only metaphorically. xD

Thanks!

Aw, this is sad, though it's really good, pirox. I hope everything gets better with Seth.

Amazing poem, pirox! I hope seth knows how lucky he is to have a friend like you.

Thanks everybody, he actually seems to be doing better, I hope it isn't an act!