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Post by Jesus4Eternity 6/23/2009, 11:00 am

(Great plot idea!)


Gasping, I tried to control the energy bubbling inside me. "Meluu, what do I do? No one can know about this!"
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Post by WordsCanKill 6/23/2009, 4:11 pm

((Why thank you. xD ))

I frowned, trying to keep my focus on this. "I have to take you back. Present-day though..." Laying Alexis' wrist gently on the table, I peeled my ring off and threw it at the windows. Expanding, the portal glowed and suddenly, you could see the view of the kingdom enlarge in the portal.
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Post by Jinx 6/23/2009, 4:36 pm

(I fixed it!)
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Post by WordsCanKill 6/23/2009, 4:40 pm

(('K! Thanks Cat!))
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 6/23/2009, 9:53 pm

WordsCanKill wrote:((Why thank you. xD ))

I frowned, trying to keep my focus on this. "I have to take you back. Present-day though..." Laying Alexis' wrist gently on the table, I peeled my ring off and threw it at the windows. Expanding, the portal glowed and suddenly, you could see the view of the kingdom enlarge in the portal.


((Why you're welcome. LOL))



"If she's going, so am I." I snarled. Alexis wasn't leaving my sight like this.
I winced slightly. "Where are we going? What's going on?"
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Post by Jinx 6/24/2009, 8:29 am

Luke walked over.He had a message for Mea.
"Hey Luke!"
"Hi."
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Post by iGrievous 6/24/2009, 8:58 am

(Was that in our RP?
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Post by Jinx 6/24/2009, 9:01 am

(Yup)
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Post by iGrievous 6/24/2009, 10:38 am

('Kay.)
Realizing that this boy could be competition, he searched his mind for who he was in relation to Mea.
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Post by Jinx 6/24/2009, 10:52 am

They were just friends,in his mind anyway.
"Whats up?"
"Mum wants to see you,as soon as you can come over."He said,glancing at Tyson.He'd disliked him as soon as he had seen him talking to her.Luke didn't know why though.This was an entirely new feeling to him.
"K' I'll be there around five-ish,okay?"
He nodded,and left.


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Post by WordsCanKill 6/24/2009, 12:49 pm

Jesus4Eternity wrote:
WordsCanKill wrote:((Why thank you. xD ))

I frowned, trying to keep my focus on this. "I have to take you back. Present-day though..." Laying Alexis' wrist gently on the table, I peeled my ring off and threw it at the windows. Expanding, the portal glowed and suddenly, you could see the view of the kingdom enlarge in the portal.


((Why you're welcome. LOL))



"If she's going, so am I." I snarled. Alexis wasn't leaving my sight like this.
I winced slightly. "Where are we going? What's going on?"

"Tough luck, rookie. I don't think that any of my kind would appreciate some hard-headed jerk like you." I put emphasis on 'my'. I glanced lightly at Alexis "We're going to the Second Kingdom. I know people there that can help."
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 6/24/2009, 3:09 pm

WordsCanKill wrote:
Jesus4Eternity wrote:
WordsCanKill wrote:((Why thank you. xD ))

I frowned, trying to keep my focus on this. "I have to take you back. Present-day though..." Laying Alexis' wrist gently on the table, I peeled my ring off and threw it at the windows. Expanding, the portal glowed and suddenly, you could see the view of the kingdom enlarge in the portal.


((Why you're welcome. LOL))



"If she's going, so am I." I snarled. Alexis wasn't leaving my sight like this.
I winced slightly. "Where are we going? What's going on?"

"Tough luck, rookie. I don't think that any of my kind would appreciate some hard-headed jerk like you." I put emphasis on 'my'. I glanced lightly at Alexis "We're going to the Second Kingdom. I know people there that can help."

"Ok. I trust you." I did. Meluu must have been in this world much longer than I had. Or, at least, some world.
"What do you mean 'your kind?"
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Post by WordsCanKill 6/24/2009, 3:45 pm

I smiled "Whatever they do to you, I promise they won't hurt you." Whirling around and facing Alex, my features elongated. Human eyes narrowed and slanted. My features turned sharper, and my ears lengthened. Taller and stronger, I bared my needle-sharp teeth in a vicious smile. "My kind."
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 6/24/2009, 4:26 pm

I stepped back instintivly. "I'm still going." I insisted.
"Let it go Alex. Just let me go." I winced slightly, adn leaned into Meluu's ear. "Just run now while he can't follow."
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Post by WordsCanKill 6/24/2009, 5:12 pm

I nodded, imperceptibly to Alexis. Turning back to Alex "Oh no you're not." I flung my hand outwards, and spears of ice started pinpointing his the various pattern of nerves along his body. "Come on." I picked Alexis up and hurtled through the portal, closing it as I went.
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Post by iGrievous 6/24/2009, 5:26 pm

Black Cat wrote:They were just friends,in his mind anyway.
"Whats up?"
"Mum wants to see you,as soon as you can come over."He said,glancing at Tyson.He had disliked the boy as soon as he had seen him talking to her.Luke didn't know why though.This was an entirely new feeling to him.
"K' I'll be there around five-ish,okay?"
He nodded,and left.


Tyson was reading Luke the whole time. Some parts made him laugh, cry, or shiver.
"I gueuss I'll see you around, Luke." He said Luke with a touch of scorn, only a psionic could tell. He started feeling hurt inside, he didn't know why, but he must've done something wrong, and developed. . . He couldn't say it, because thinking was like talking for a psionic. Maybe he actually developed feelings for this girl? How?. . . The reason for the hurt was that Mea was apparently liking Luke better than Tyson. . .
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Post by Jinx 6/24/2009, 5:29 pm

She waved a hand in front of his face
"You okay?"
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Post by iGrievous 6/24/2009, 5:36 pm

He coughed a little. . . "Yeah, just caught a fly in my mouth, is all. . ."
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Post by Jinx 6/24/2009, 5:37 pm

"Oh,eww.That happened to me once,only it was a ladybug"
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Post by iGrievous 6/24/2009, 5:40 pm

Tyson pretended to cough up. "Bleah, bleah!"
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Post by Jinx 6/24/2009, 5:43 pm

Mea chuckled,then caught one of her angels (creatures that only she could see) out the corner of her eyes.She paled.
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Post by iGrievous 6/24/2009, 5:45 pm

(Angels?)

He put his hands on his knees, and coughed hardly, then in a hoarse voice, said, "I got 'im."
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Post by Jinx 6/24/2009, 5:47 pm

(Uh..Yes.This Mea thought they were her guardian angels when she was little.)
The creature twisted the other humans mind to give him physical presence.That was all he could do.This boy was not connected.
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Post by iGrievous 6/24/2009, 5:49 pm

Tyson wondered what now. . .
(So is he supposed to see them, or not?)
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Post by Jinx 6/24/2009, 5:51 pm

(Yup)
"Hello."He said,then turned to Mea"Come with me now.It's very important"
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