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Post by DiscardedHarmony 5/10/2010, 10:34 pm

Are you washing your face in my
stolen innocence or merely gloating over
your trove of snatched treasures?
[your lovely dragon hoard]

It's funny how beauty stole beauty and
dumped it somewhere in the midst
of our horribly polluted oceans.
[give me the beginning again]

Is this a victory for you, to snatch
the tongue from my mouth and tack it
to your wall as a trophy?
[you told me I was wonderful]

When your touch made my heart skip a beat,
not in admiration but in fear,
and my thoughts stuttered and froze
while the hairs on the back of my neck stood up, I thought
this is too much.
[do you know what you took from me?]
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Post by shadowsowner888 5/10/2010, 11:13 pm

Guess what?

I looooove it! Very Happy This one in particular stood out to me, because of the little bit where you said 'dragon.' x3
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Post by DiscardedHarmony 5/10/2010, 11:15 pm

Ahah, thank you (:
Yeah, I like teh dragon part too. :3
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