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Post by Webkinz-lover#1 8/13/2009, 11:43 am

I don't know what the punishment is gonna be yet. Razz
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Post by shadowsowner888 8/13/2009, 11:48 am

Twisted Evil They can paint the bathrooms!!!

xD Okay, that didn't sound as epic as I thought.
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Post by twilighter3000 8/13/2009, 12:54 pm

Sweet! I didn't realize you added more! I love it!
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Post by rattyjol 8/13/2009, 8:15 pm

Awesome! Uh oh, dey is gonna be in trooooooubllllle. XD
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Post by Webkinz-lover#1 8/13/2009, 10:16 pm

Thanks guys. Smile

Yes, big trouble. XD

Maybe they have to clean the bathrooms, both bathrooms. XD
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Post by iGrievous 8/14/2009, 8:51 am

I dunno, it'd be funny if they had to do something totally unrelated.
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Post by IDmangapasta 8/14/2009, 6:41 pm

O_O how could they? Revenge is not the answer...... *sends Elyssa and Jessi off to peel potatoes*

write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Webkinz-lover#1 8/14/2009, 9:21 pm

Peel potatoes? XD

Hah, they have to come in before school starts and help lunch ladies make the lunches. XD
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Post by DreamCatcher81 8/14/2009, 11:30 pm

Ooh that one could be good. Because everyone would hate having to wake up earlier and help the cafeteria lunch ladies! xD
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Post by Webkinz-lover#1 8/15/2009, 4:41 pm

Hah, I have an idea. *Runs away to write chapter*
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Post by Webkinz-lover#1 8/15/2009, 4:46 pm

~Chapter 13~

Elyssa sat at home on her bed, dreading the school day ahead of her tomorrow. She sighed, why did she have to take revenge? Why couldn't she just have spread some rumors like Rebeka did and be happy? She asked herself many questions, but she was jerked back to reality when her cell phone rang from across the room. She jumped up and dove for the phone, realizing it had been ringing for a while. She looked at the screen, it was Jess. She winced and let it keep ringing, Jess was probably just going to speak Elyssa's fears. Her phone beeped, reading '1 missed call'. She ignored it and a few minutes later, it beeped again, signaling '1 voice message'. She flipped her phone open and listened to Jess's message, and sure enough, she was just freaking out, just as Elyssa was in silence.


(Yup, my idea for the punishment isn't in there, you'll have to wait to see what their punishment will be. >:3)
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Post by rattyjol 8/15/2009, 4:56 pm

Mooooooooore! Smile
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Post by Webkinz-lover#1 8/15/2009, 4:58 pm

Not yet, Ratty. Evil or Very Mad
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Post by shadowsowner888 8/15/2009, 8:19 pm

I agree with Ratty. nod
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Post by twilighter3000 8/15/2009, 8:35 pm

Ooh, can't wait until you write more!
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Post by Webkinz-lover#1 8/15/2009, 10:39 pm

Thanks guys. :]

But not yet. >:3

After all this dramatizing, their punishment is going to be a fail. XD
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Post by shadowsowner888 8/15/2009, 10:49 pm

xD I bet it won't be.
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Post by Webkinz-lover#1 8/15/2009, 11:03 pm

Thanks, Shadow. :]

Who knows, maybe I will write the new chapter tonight...
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Post by rattyjol 8/15/2009, 11:09 pm

Yeah! cheesy
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Post by Webkinz-lover#1 8/15/2009, 11:21 pm

Nah, I'm too tired, I'll probably write it tomorrow. Razz
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Post by rattyjol 8/15/2009, 11:29 pm

Aww... Sad
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Post by Webkinz-lover#1 8/16/2009, 2:21 pm

Sorry, Ratty, but I'll prob write it today.
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Post by rattyjol 8/16/2009, 2:25 pm

Yay! cheesy
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Post by Webkinz-lover#1 8/16/2009, 2:27 pm

Probably right now. XD *Starts writing chapter*
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Post by Webkinz-lover#1 8/16/2009, 2:34 pm

~Chapter 14~

Elyssa dreaded the school day ahead of her, she skipped breakfast, drearily pulled on her jacket and headed out the door, fearing seeing her teachers today. She met Jess on the bus and they sat together in silence, staring out the window. The bus brakes screeched as it stopped at the next stop, where Rebeka got on, glaring at them as she passed to go sit in the back. They pulled up at the school and were welcomed by the chattering voices of other students and teachers. They exited the bus reluctantly and walked side-by-side into the building. They almost immediately ran into the principal, Mr. Lem, who Elyssa hadn't seen since her first detention. He crossed his arms, beckoned to them and walked into the office. They both followed sulkily, dreading what would happen next..


Hah, you still don't know what's going to happen. >:3
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