She's the one, I'm sure of it. *Not finished* --Finally updated--
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Re: She's the one, I'm sure of it. *Not finished* --Finally updated--
Read it and loved it! I agree with Shadow. Bad Elyssa! xD
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*GASP* she disobeyed her dad!!! tsk, tsk, elyssa!
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I just read all the parts I haven't read yet. Great job!!
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Thanks to both of you.
Yup, she is a baaaad girl! >:]
Yup, she is a baaaad girl! >:]
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Wow, she's in trouble!
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Sorry, I've been so inactive! I'll add more soon. =]
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You're welcome!
Oooh, I'll go read it!
Oooh, I'll go read it!
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Awesome! This is really good!
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yay, she was nice to her daddy!
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Yup, yay for niceness! Thanks for commenting, guys!
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Re: She's the one, I'm sure of it. *Not finished* --Finally updated--
Main post finally got too long. XD
Current number of words: 2,938!
Current number of words: 2,938!
~Chapter 8~
Elyssa woke the next morning. She jumped up, looking in the mirror, to see a hideous mess of hair all over, "Restless sleeping," She growled, grabbing her brush. She brushed through the rats, glad it was Saturday. She skipped downstairs, in a great mood, until she saw her dad and remembered what happened. She turned around, "On second thought, I'm not really hungry." She started to run back up the stairs. "Not so fast." Her dad called before she had gotten more than half-way up the stairs. She spun around on her heel, "What?" Her dad raised one eyebrow, "Don't act like you don't know what's going on. Now come down here, we are going to talk about it." Elyssa closed her eyes. "Crap," She muttered under her breath. She went back down the stairs and tripped on the last stair, falling flat on her face. She jumped back up, realizing her dad hadn't seen her. However, her idiot brother was laughing his head off and clapping like he had just seen one of the funniest things in the world. Elyssa glared at him, then her dad walked in, she dropped the glare and sat down, as far away from her dad as possible. Here comes the trouble, She gulped, eyes glued to the table instead of making eye contact.
Elyssa woke the next morning. She jumped up, looking in the mirror, to see a hideous mess of hair all over, "Restless sleeping," She growled, grabbing her brush. She brushed through the rats, glad it was Saturday. She skipped downstairs, in a great mood, until she saw her dad and remembered what happened. She turned around, "On second thought, I'm not really hungry." She started to run back up the stairs. "Not so fast." Her dad called before she had gotten more than half-way up the stairs. She spun around on her heel, "What?" Her dad raised one eyebrow, "Don't act like you don't know what's going on. Now come down here, we are going to talk about it." Elyssa closed her eyes. "Crap," She muttered under her breath. She went back down the stairs and tripped on the last stair, falling flat on her face. She jumped back up, realizing her dad hadn't seen her. However, her idiot brother was laughing his head off and clapping like he had just seen one of the funniest things in the world. Elyssa glared at him, then her dad walked in, she dropped the glare and sat down, as far away from her dad as possible. Here comes the trouble, She gulped, eyes glued to the table instead of making eye contact.
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Awesome. That's great! Almost 3,000!
I like the new chappie. I wonder what her punishment will be?
I like the new chappie. I wonder what her punishment will be?
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This is a really great story so far! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Thanks. :]
I'll write more soon.
I'll write more soon.
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Yay! I can't wait!
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I'll probably post Chapter 9 later on tonight!
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Oops, obviously I didn't write at that time, but now I shall write it.
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~Chapter 9~ (I think. XD)
When Elyssa looked back up, her dad was smiling. Wait, smiling!? Elyssa must have made a face, because her dad laughed. "Elyssa, I'm not mad. You know why?" Elyssa shook her head, completely confused. "Because you remind me of me when I was a kid. I snuck out of my house too, of course I was a little older, but I crawled through my window against my parent's command and went out with your mother." Elyssa's jaw dropped, completely surprised, "Wait, I'm not in trouble?" She asked. Her dad just shook his head, smiling. She grinned, happy. Everyone was happy right now, except her little brother who looked quite angry that she wasn't in trouble. "Oh get over it sport!" She said, tousling his hair. He glared at her, his brown hair now sticking up in a few places. Elyssa finished her breakfast and skipped upstairs. She went through the whole day now, happy and care-free, quite unlike her brother, who acted like someone had just told him he had repeat a year of school.
When Elyssa looked back up, her dad was smiling. Wait, smiling!? Elyssa must have made a face, because her dad laughed. "Elyssa, I'm not mad. You know why?" Elyssa shook her head, completely confused. "Because you remind me of me when I was a kid. I snuck out of my house too, of course I was a little older, but I crawled through my window against my parent's command and went out with your mother." Elyssa's jaw dropped, completely surprised, "Wait, I'm not in trouble?" She asked. Her dad just shook his head, smiling. She grinned, happy. Everyone was happy right now, except her little brother who looked quite angry that she wasn't in trouble. "Oh get over it sport!" She said, tousling his hair. He glared at her, his brown hair now sticking up in a few places. Elyssa finished her breakfast and skipped upstairs. She went through the whole day now, happy and care-free, quite unlike her brother, who acted like someone had just told him he had repeat a year of school.
(Sorry it's so short, I don't know what to write right now, I got minor WB. Nothing big though. )
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