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Post by GraceMarie8 on 7/19/2010, 7:27 pm

IDK, does she? O.o

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Post by Rai on 7/19/2010, 7:29 pm

Oooh, I like the new chapter! Wonderful job! Can't wait for chapter 3, lol. Very Happy
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Post by conich on 7/19/2010, 7:34 pm

Cliff hanger! No! Very Happy lol Can't wait for chapter 3!
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Post by GraceMarie8 on 7/19/2010, 9:07 pm

Thanks you two! Working on chapter 3 now.
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Post by The Newms on 7/19/2010, 9:33 pm

Somehow, it seems to me that even if Iris was an accident, her mom would at least treat her with some affection. I guess you'll reveal all of that later on in the story, it was just my observation. Because, if her mother really didn't want to keep Iris, they would've put her up for adoption after her birth, so one would think that there is a slight amount of affection involved...? But that's just me. And I expect another shocking ending from you, Grace, of course. ;]


Other than that, I'm really enjoying your story. xD Maybe it has something to do with the fact that I've been down south for a few days (I'm actually from the North), but I keep reading whatever aunt Katie says in this southern valley girl kinda accent. xD
Anyhoozle, I'll be waiting for Chapter Three!
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Post by GraceMarie8 on 7/19/2010, 9:57 pm

The Newms wrote:Somehow, it seems to me that even if Iris was an accident, her mom would at least treat her with some affection. I guess you'll reveal all of that later on in the story, it was just my observation. Because, if her mother really didn't want to keep Iris, they would've put her up for adoption after her birth, so one would think that there is a slight amount of affection involved...? But that's just me. And I expect another shocking ending from you, Grace, of course. ;]


Other than that, I'm really enjoying your story. xD Maybe it has something to do with the fact that I've been down south for a few days (I'm actually from the North), but I keep reading whatever aunt Katie says in this southern valley girl kinda accent. xD
Anyhoozle, I'll be waiting for Chapter Three!

Well, yes, thats revealed later in the story... It will make sense at the end.
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Haha me too! Very Happy Its easier to write it if I think of her accent lol.
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Post by The Newms on 7/19/2010, 9:59 pm

That's how these stories typically unfold...well, I'm a rather corny person when it comes to books and movies, so I really hope everything works out. ^.^ (But it'll still be a good story even if it doesn't.)

I know exactly what you mean; I have characters like that, too.
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Post by GraceMarie8 on 7/21/2010, 12:33 am

Chapter 3 up! Very Happy
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Post by Mrs. Jessi O'Shea on 7/21/2010, 10:07 am

Chapter 3 was really good. nod Can't wait to see what happens next! Very Happy
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Post by GraceMarie8 on 7/21/2010, 12:36 pm

Thanks! Smile
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Post by Akeria on 7/21/2010, 12:56 pm

So I read chapter two and three, and after I finished I was like "WHERE'S CHAPTER FOURRRR?" I request its presence.

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Post by conich on 7/21/2010, 5:32 pm

I too request the presence of chapter four nod
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Post by GraceMarie8 on 7/21/2010, 8:10 pm

Haha, I started a little bit of it. I'll try to have it up tonight.
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Post by Akeria on 7/21/2010, 8:27 pm

Yay!

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Post by B on 7/21/2010, 9:29 pm

Hello, Grace! I loved this story so much I featured it in my review in my blog. There isn't a thing wrong with it! It's so moving. I've been reading it for about a day now.
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Post by GraceMarie8 on 7/21/2010, 10:06 pm

Thank you B! Very Happy It means a lot to me. I really like this story myself, I enjoy writing it Wink
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Post by conich on 7/21/2010, 10:10 pm

Yay! I hope you can post it tonight Smile
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Post by The Newms on 7/21/2010, 11:03 pm

Ah, sorry. I once knew a kid named Clint and he was such a jerk. Dx I'm afraid I'll just never be able to warm up the cute new southern boy....

But it was still a lovely Chapter; I love aunt Katie's random affair xD
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Post by GraceMarie8 on 7/21/2010, 11:53 pm

xD I hate it when I read stories and characters have the same names as people I know. Esp when they are jerkish guys' names. -_-

Haha, me too. I just made that up off the spot but I now have a plan for it in thr plot. smug
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Post by GraceMarie8 on 7/25/2010, 4:14 pm

Chapter 4 up!
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Post by Mrs. Jessi O'Shea on 7/25/2010, 4:30 pm

Aw, I love it! :3 Can't wait until you put up the rest of the chapters and I get to see how it ends. Smile
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Post by GraceMarie8 on 7/25/2010, 6:18 pm

Thanks!

I actually might have enough material for this to be a novel. :O
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Post by shadowsowner888 on 7/25/2010, 8:34 pm

Chapter four was so cute! x3

If this ends up a novel, that'll be so cool. :3 I wish you luck!

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Post by conich on 7/25/2010, 9:29 pm

Aww! That's so cute! I'm starting to like Clint smug
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Post by GraceMarie8 on 7/25/2010, 10:09 pm

shadowsowner888 wrote:Chapter four was so cute! x3

If this ends up a novel, that'll be so cool. :3 I wish you luck!

Thank youu Smile
I went to do a chapter outline so I didn't forget a few really cool ideas I had, and so far I have gotten through chapter 20, and I still have more material. Assuming each chapter is at least 2000, it will probably be a short novel Smile
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