Karlyn's freewrites
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Karlyn's freewrites
Dear lousy wish jornal
Dear wish jornal,
Today I , Maggie Manson, wished I could fly. Again you lousy wish jornal diapointed me. Here I'll explain, see i woke up this morning thinnking "Hey this is going to be an amazing day!" Well guess what girl was wrong? If you guessed Lady Gaga your wrong, it was me, Maggie. So i walk downstairs all happy and junk.
I had a good breakfast my hair looked perfect. I felt amazing. So i hear 3 knocks on the front door, when i anwsered the door it was my boyfriend, Mayson. (Ironic I know!) "Why Mason why are you here?" I asked as suprised as possible.
"Maggie can we talk?" He asked
"Of course what is it?" I wondered excitedly with a huge smile on my face.
"I think we need to see other people." He said with that kind smile still on his face.
"Oh!" I said that amazing smile was gone. Did i mention it was my birthday? Oh well today was my 16th birthday. "Oh I thought you were here for my birthday!" I questioned with a shocked face.
"Todays your birthday?" He looked amazed like I was a shadow and I wasn't alive.
"Bye Bye now." I screamed as I closed the door on his face. So there ruins my perfect day. When I got to school me and my friend got in a fight. At lunch I spilled chocalote milk all over my white dress. I got 3 F's on my math, social studies, and science test's.
When I got home I was getting ready for my party when my mom knocked on my door. "Maggie, Honey we are ready for your party at build-a-bear!" Mom sweetly said. Oh Build-A-Bear! My mom got were I wanted my party mixed up with a 6 year olds play pin place! I walked out of my room and screamed! Now I'm laying on my bed righting in you telling you why I wish I could fly away.
LOVE,
Maggie Manson, Single 16 year old.
Dear wish jornal,
Today I , Maggie Manson, wished I could fly. Again you lousy wish jornal diapointed me. Here I'll explain, see i woke up this morning thinnking "Hey this is going to be an amazing day!" Well guess what girl was wrong? If you guessed Lady Gaga your wrong, it was me, Maggie. So i walk downstairs all happy and junk.
I had a good breakfast my hair looked perfect. I felt amazing. So i hear 3 knocks on the front door, when i anwsered the door it was my boyfriend, Mayson. (Ironic I know!) "Why Mason why are you here?" I asked as suprised as possible.
"Maggie can we talk?" He asked
"Of course what is it?" I wondered excitedly with a huge smile on my face.
"I think we need to see other people." He said with that kind smile still on his face.
"Oh!" I said that amazing smile was gone. Did i mention it was my birthday? Oh well today was my 16th birthday. "Oh I thought you were here for my birthday!" I questioned with a shocked face.
"Todays your birthday?" He looked amazed like I was a shadow and I wasn't alive.
"Bye Bye now." I screamed as I closed the door on his face. So there ruins my perfect day. When I got to school me and my friend got in a fight. At lunch I spilled chocalote milk all over my white dress. I got 3 F's on my math, social studies, and science test's.
When I got home I was getting ready for my party when my mom knocked on my door. "Maggie, Honey we are ready for your party at build-a-bear!" Mom sweetly said. Oh Build-A-Bear! My mom got were I wanted my party mixed up with a 6 year olds play pin place! I walked out of my room and screamed! Now I'm laying on my bed righting in you telling you why I wish I could fly away.
LOVE,
Maggie Manson, Single 16 year old.
Rosebell32- Short Story Writer
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Re: Karlyn's freewrites
Please remember that the colors red and blue are reserved for the mods and admin. Because you'd posted this freewrite in blue, I changed it to darkblue for you.
Re: Karlyn's freewrites
Thank you so much!
Rosebell32- Short Story Writer
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Re: Karlyn's freewrites
This freewrite is cute, Karlyn. Aside from a few grammatical errors, I liked it! x3
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