The Life of a Teenage Spy [Chapter 8 posted]
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Re: The Life of a Teenage Spy [Chapter 8 posted]
by shadowsowner888 5/21/2010, 9:51 pm
I think your writing style is cool! If anything, I would work on adding a couple subplots to your work. :3 The plot as is is exciting, but subplots would help bring people enjoy it even more.
I do have to agree with you on the name, though. I mean, it's not that it's a bad name, just that it's - as you said - a little overused. Spy by itself would sound pretty cool! ^^
I do have to agree with you on the name, though. I mean, it's not that it's a bad name, just that it's - as you said - a little overused. Spy by itself would sound pretty cool! ^^
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Re: The Life of a Teenage Spy [Chapter 8 posted]
by 4everme4everbeauty 5/22/2010, 9:10 am
Thanks Shadow! I'll work on that!
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Re: The Life of a Teenage Spy [Chapter 8 posted]
by 4everme4everbeauty 6/1/2010, 9:23 pm
Ta da! Chapter 8 has been posted! Making my TwigWriSum word count 1924!
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Re: The Life of a Teenage Spy [Chapter 8 posted]
by leah_hope92 6/1/2010, 9:40 pm
Wow. I did not expect that. Are her parents back? Her real ones?
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Re: The Life of a Teenage Spy [Chapter 8 posted]
by 4everme4everbeauty 6/1/2010, 9:46 pm
You'll find out 
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